The diagram below shows how instant noodles are manufactured.
Summaries the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
The diagrammatic representation depicts how instant noodles are manufactured in 8 different stages.
Overall, it can be manifested that, the process involves total of 8 steps. Starting with storing flour into the silos and culminating with noodles being labelled.
Initially, the first stage of the process involves sotring of flour into silos. Then flour has been mixed in mixer with water and oil. After which flour is rolled on rollers and then it has been doughed on the dough sheets and striped on the dough strips. Following it noodles set on the noodle discs.
Once, noodles has been set to the noodle discs it have been cooked using cooking oil and put under the dryer to dry. In the next step vegetables and spices are added to the noodle and then it has been added into cups. Finally, after adding it into the cups they are sended for the labelling and sealing where the cups of noodles are being labelled.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 51, Rule ID: IT_VBZ[1]
Message: Did you mean 'has'?
Suggestion: has
...les has been set to the noodle discs it have been cooked using cooking oil and put u...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
finally, first, if, so, then
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 7.0 186% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 6.8 118% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.15609756098 95% => OK
Pronoun: 8.0 5.60731707317 143% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 24.0 33.7804878049 71% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.97073170732 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 766.0 965.302439024 79% => OK
No of words: 160.0 196.424390244 81% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.7875 4.92477711251 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.55655882008 3.73543355544 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.35952193251 2.65546596893 89% => OK
Unique words: 88.0 106.607317073 83% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.55 0.547539520022 100% => OK
syllable_count: 224.1 283.868780488 79% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.33902439024 69% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 3.36585365854 89% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 8.94146341463 112% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 22.4926829268 71% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 26.575176387 43.030603864 62% => OK
Chars per sentence: 76.6 112.824112599 68% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.0 22.9334400587 70% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.8 5.23603664747 53% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 0.0 3.70975609756 0% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 10.0 4.09268292683 244% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.107829926224 0.215688989381 50% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.049766577222 0.103423049105 48% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0600199708524 0.0843802449381 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0842511206646 0.15604864568 54% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.068235865674 0.0819641961636 83% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.1 13.2329268293 69% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 72.16 61.2550243902 118% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 10.3012195122 70% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.21 11.4140731707 89% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.08 8.06136585366 100% => OK
difficult_words: 37.0 40.7170731707 91% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 11.4329268293 52% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.9970731707 76% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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