The diagram below shows how a modern landfill for household waste is designed. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The process details the step by which the land is development.
Looking from an overall perspective, it it’s rapidly apparent that this linear and simple procedure can be divided into two main stages and four steps , beginning with construction and ending with closure.
The process commences when the man made a hole for landfill and choose the kind of trees they want to development. From this point, the second step is use synthetic substance in surface and install two drainage pipes on the left and right, the drainage tank and clay at the bottom ( left and right) and then later undergo a use household trash is collected and delivered at the site and buried in the landfill. Afterwards, the trash will promotes a waste-liquid and clay. The next stage is closure, it is covered the clay and pipes for prevent toxic gases from being released into the air. Finally, they are promotes an better landfill and better solution in the future.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 12, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
The process details the step by which the land is de...
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Line 2, column 38, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a word
Suggestion: it
.... Looking from an overall perspective, it it’s rapidly apparent that this linear and...
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Line 2, column 151, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...ided into two main stages and four steps , beginning with construction and ending ...
^^
Line 3, column 280, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...the drainage tank and clay at the bottom left and right and then later undergo a ...
^^
Line 3, column 436, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[1]
Message: The verb 'will' requires base form of the verb: 'promote'.
Suggestion: promote
...he landfill. Afterwards, the trash will promotes a waste-liquid and clay. The next stage...
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Line 3, column 615, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'a' instead of 'an' if the following word doesn't start with a vowel sound, e.g. 'a sentence', 'a university'
Suggestion: a
...nto the air. Finally, they are promotes an better landfill and better solution in ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
finally, look, second, so, then, kind of
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.0 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 1.00243902439 200% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 6.8 206% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.15609756098 95% => OK
Pronoun: 8.0 5.60731707317 143% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 16.0 33.7804878049 47% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 5.0 3.97073170732 126% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 781.0 965.302439024 81% => OK
No of words: 161.0 196.424390244 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.85093167702 4.92477711251 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.56210296601 3.73543355544 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.50712291181 2.65546596893 94% => OK
Unique words: 102.0 106.607317073 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.633540372671 0.547539520022 116% => OK
syllable_count: 234.9 283.868780488 83% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 1.53170731707 196% => OK
Article: 6.0 4.33902439024 138% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 3.36585365854 30% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 8.94146341463 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 22.4926829268 102% => OK
Sentence length SD: 79.9372202649 43.030603864 186% => OK
Chars per sentence: 111.571428571 112.824112599 99% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.0 22.9334400587 100% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.71428571429 5.23603664747 109% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 3.83414634146 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 6.0 1.69756097561 353% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 3.70975609756 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.09268292683 73% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0653815792183 0.215688989381 30% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0305713877264 0.103423049105 30% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0191110647576 0.0843802449381 23% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0304415457795 0.15604864568 20% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0290033151536 0.0819641961636 35% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.9 13.2329268293 97% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 56.59 61.2550243902 92% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 10.3012195122 108% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.15 11.4140731707 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.6 8.06136585366 107% => OK
difficult_words: 39.0 40.7170731707 96% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 11.4329268293 114% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.9970731707 102% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 11.0658536585 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 11.2359550562 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 9
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