The diagram below shows how orange juice is produced.
The diagram gives information about the process of orange juice production.
In general, there are a total of 17 steps and include three main stages: delivery, storage and finally selling and consuming.
Firstly, fresh oranges are transported to a factory, where oranges are washed by a hygienic machine. Then, these oranges are extracted into two substances which include orange pulp and fresh orange juice. Animals feed the orange pulp and fresh orange juice is packaged and sold in shops, or stored in a refrigerator truck to be evaporated.
Next, the evaporation process involves boiling the water away until the residue i.e. concentrate juice is left. After that, this liquid is canned and stored until being transported to a warehouse where water is added to make orange juice - this final product is then packaged products. Finally, packaged orange juice is shipped to the supermarkets and shops for the need of consuming.
- It is better to be unemployed in jobs rather than to be employed in jobs even if they don t feel happy or enjoy it Do you agree or disagree 84
- The diagram shows changes in Felistone in the UL between 1967 and 2001 56
- To succeed in business one needs to know maths To what extent do you agree or disagree 67
- Some children spend hours every day on their smartphones Why is this the case Do you think this is a positive or a negative development 78
- The diagram shows the process of making soft cheese 61
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 25, Rule ID: THERE_RE_MANY[3]
Message: Possible agreement error. Did you mean 'totals'?
Suggestion: totals
...ce production. In general, there are a total of 17 steps and include three main stag...
^^^^^
Line 4, column 68, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ss involves boiling the water away until the residue i.e. concentrate juice is le...
^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
finally, first, firstly, so, then, in general
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 7.0 171% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 6.8 132% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.15609756098 127% => OK
Pronoun: 5.0 5.60731707317 89% => OK
Preposition: 17.0 33.7804878049 50% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 3.0 3.97073170732 76% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 782.0 965.302439024 81% => OK
No of words: 150.0 196.424390244 76% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.21333333333 4.92477711251 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.49963551158 3.73543355544 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.62953105657 2.65546596893 99% => OK
Unique words: 91.0 106.607317073 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.606666666667 0.547539520022 111% => OK
syllable_count: 253.8 283.868780488 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.45097560976 117% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.33902439024 46% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 3.36585365854 59% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 8.94146341463 89% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 22.4926829268 80% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 27.5952894531 43.030603864 64% => OK
Chars per sentence: 97.75 112.824112599 87% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.75 22.9334400587 82% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.625 5.23603664747 107% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 1.69756097561 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 3.70975609756 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.09268292683 122% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.250280644166 0.215688989381 116% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.121768430121 0.103423049105 118% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0708444158944 0.0843802449381 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.150047848228 0.15604864568 96% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0953465893105 0.0819641961636 116% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.5 13.2329268293 94% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 44.75 61.2550243902 73% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 10.3012195122 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.94 11.4140731707 113% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.06 8.06136585366 112% => OK
difficult_words: 43.0 40.7170731707 106% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 11.4329268293 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.9970731707 84% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 11.0658536585 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?
---------------------
More content wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
---------------------
Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.