The diagram below shows how salt is removed from sea water to make it drinkable.
The diagram illustrates how salt is separated from seawater to produce drinkable water.
At a glance, there are six stages of the process, starting from saltwater intake and finishing to integrate the water into the supply system.
On the first step, seawater is channeled into a saltwater intake pipe, and water undergoes the first filter process (pre-treatment filter). In this filtering process, the salt residue is disposed of, and it is channeled back to the sea. Next, the first treatment water is forced through the membrane using a high-pressure mechanism that separates salt and other materials. Following that, salt concentrations are then removed using a pipe. Before the water is stored into water storage, the purifying process is done using three substances (lime, chlorine, and fluoride), and purified water is produced. At the final step, the water is integrated into the water supply system and it is channeling to households to be used by people.
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- Some claim that men are naturally more competitive than women To what extent do you agree or disagree 56
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 86, Rule ID: ADMIT_ENJOY_VB[1]
Message: This verb is used with the gerund form: 'finishing integrating'.
Suggestion: finishing integrating
...ess, starting from saltwater intake and finishing to integrate the water into the supply system. On...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, if, then
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 7.0 186% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 6.8 103% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.15609756098 63% => OK
Pronoun: 5.0 5.60731707317 89% => OK
Preposition: 20.0 33.7804878049 59% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 2.0 3.97073170732 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 812.0 965.302439024 84% => OK
No of words: 155.0 196.424390244 79% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.23870967742 4.92477711251 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.52844152537 3.73543355544 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.77497363376 2.65546596893 105% => OK
Unique words: 90.0 106.607317073 84% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.58064516129 0.547539520022 106% => OK
syllable_count: 253.8 283.868780488 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.45097560976 110% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 5.0 4.33902439024 115% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 0.482926829268 828% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 3.36585365854 149% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 8.94146341463 89% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 22.4926829268 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 30.1472946547 43.030603864 70% => OK
Chars per sentence: 101.5 112.824112599 90% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.375 22.9334400587 84% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.875 5.23603664747 36% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 3.0 3.83414634146 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 0.0 3.70975609756 0% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.09268292683 171% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.25846730675 0.215688989381 120% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.127742359176 0.103423049105 124% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.106966131842 0.0843802449381 127% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.218268680831 0.15604864568 140% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.135241526261 0.0819641961636 165% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.9 13.2329268293 97% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 61.2550243902 85% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 10.3012195122 104% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.11 11.4140731707 115% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.77 8.06136585366 121% => OK
difficult_words: 51.0 40.7170731707 125% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 11.4329268293 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.9970731707 87% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 11.0658536585 90% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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