The diagram below shows how salt is removed from sea water to make it drinkable.
The diagram illustrates the process of making drinkable water from the use of seawater.
Overall, there are a number of stages in this process, beginning with water being taken from the sea and ending with the supply of integrated water.
At the first stage of the process, saltwater is collected from the sea, after which it undergoes the filtering stage so that the solid objects or debris can be removed before sending them back to the sea. Subsequently, the filtered water is forced through a membrane at high pressure where water molecules are passed through and salt and other impurities are completely disposed of and returned back to the sea.
The process continues with the post treatment stage, at which point the water is treated with lime, chlorine and fluoride to make it clean and drinkable. At the final stage of the process, the purified water is stored in a container and is then delivered to the integrated water system where it is ready for being distributed for consumption.
- The movement of people from agricultural areas to cities to work can cause serious problems in both places What are the serious problems What measures can be used to solve these problems 84
- The bar chart below shows the amount of money invested in each category from five organisations 78
- The table illustrates the percentage of male and female in terms of weight in Vietnam from 1999 to 2009 79
- The pie charts below show exports from various EU countries to India and China in 2000 and 2011 80
- You saw an advertisement for a tennis course in England but you have one or two problems and can t stay the whole course Write a letter to the course director In your letter explain your interest in the course describe your problems find out if a refund i 73
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 387, Rule ID: RETURN_BACK[1]
Message: Use simply 'returned'.
Suggestion: returned
...purities are completely disposed of and returned back to the sea. The process continues wi...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, if, so, then
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 7.0 171% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 6.8 118% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.15609756098 158% => OK
Pronoun: 6.0 5.60731707317 107% => OK
Preposition: 28.0 33.7804878049 83% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.97073170732 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 837.0 965.302439024 87% => OK
No of words: 169.0 196.424390244 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.95266272189 4.92477711251 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.60555127546 3.73543355544 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.58023449083 2.65546596893 97% => OK
Unique words: 96.0 106.607317073 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.568047337278 0.547539520022 104% => OK
syllable_count: 258.3 283.868780488 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.33902439024 92% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 3.36585365854 119% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 6.0 8.94146341463 67% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 28.0 22.4926829268 124% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 41.3225792462 43.030603864 96% => OK
Chars per sentence: 139.5 112.824112599 124% => OK
Words per sentence: 28.1666666667 22.9334400587 123% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.0 5.23603664747 76% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 3.70975609756 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.09268292683 24% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.268059242734 0.215688989381 124% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.149825855103 0.103423049105 145% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0905943161967 0.0843802449381 107% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.192124978971 0.15604864568 123% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0911610732113 0.0819641961636 111% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.0 13.2329268293 121% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.52 61.2550243902 84% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.0 10.3012195122 126% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.73 11.4140731707 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.23 8.06136585366 114% => OK
difficult_words: 45.0 40.7170731707 111% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 11.4329268293 122% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.2 10.9970731707 120% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 11.0658536585 127% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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