You and some friends ate a meal at a restaurant to celebrate a special occasion and you were very pleased with the food and service

Essay topics:

You and some friends ate a meal at a restaurant to celebrate a special occasion, and you were very pleased with the food and service.

Dear Sir or Madam,
I am writing to express my appreciation for the magnificent food and service at your restaurant last Saturday evening.
Actually, i had never known your place until I found an advertisement on the Internet. After having a look at the positive comments from previous customer, I decided to make a dinner reservation / book a table for dinner / reserve a table for dinner for me and five other colleagues.
Getting promoted to team leader at work was a memorable milestone in my career / working life, so I organised a party to celebrate my achievement.
I am incredibly impressed with your restaurant for several reasons. Firstly, the food was not only tasty but also varied. There were a wide range of cuisine from different parts of the world. Another point is the attitude of the staff. Although the restaurant was quite busy that day, they were extremely hospitable and enthusiastic because they welcomed us with a friendly smile and were willing to give us honest food recommendations. Also, we could create a vibrant atmosphere during the party thanks to the available karaoke room.
Once again, I really appreciated such an enjoyable experience from your place.
Yours faithfully,
Dat Tran

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 19, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
Dear Sir or Madam, I am writing to express my appreciation ...
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Line 3, column 11, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...rant last Saturday evening. Actually, i had never known your place until I foun...
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Line 7, column 18, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ence from your place. Yours faithfully, Dat Tran
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, also, but, first, firstly, if, look, really, so, thus

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.48453608247 94% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 4.92783505155 20% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 5.05154639175 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.03092783505 33% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 32.9175257732 67% => OK
Preposition: 22.0 26.3917525773 83% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.85567010309 130% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1024.0 937.175257732 109% => OK
No of words: 201.0 206.0 98% => OK
Chars per words: 5.09452736318 4.54256449028 112% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.76529505866 3.78020617076 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.93811932619 2.54303337028 116% => OK
Unique words: 139.0 127.690721649 109% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.691542288557 0.622605031667 111% => OK
syllable_count: 325.8 290.88556701 112% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.41237113402 113% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.13402061856 88% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6804123711 95% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 16.3608247423 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 54.9497244963 44.8134815571 123% => OK
Chars per sentence: 85.3333333333 76.5299724578 112% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.75 16.8248392259 100% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.25 4.34317383033 121% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 2.54639175258 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 7.41237113402 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.94845360825 101% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.141795835452 0.216113520407 66% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0423930801834 0.0766984524023 55% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0483836452985 0.0603063233224 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0695357299338 0.12726935374 55% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0601264141804 0.0580467560999 104% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.9 8.37731958763 130% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 55.24 70.7449484536 78% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 7.45979381443 127% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.95 8.71597938144 137% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.52 7.59969072165 112% => OK
difficult_words: 52.0 41.2886597938 126% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 8.62886597938 168% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 8.54432989691 98% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.