The pie charts below show information about where coffee is produced consumed where its profit goes

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The pie charts below show information about where coffee is produced, consumed & where its profit goes

The charts give information about different regions of the world that produced and consumed coffee and how its profit is distributed.

Overall, the majority of coffee is produced in South America, whereas Europe is considered the dominant consumer. It is also clear that a large proportion of profits gained by selling coffee go to shippers.

Nearly half of the total coffee is produced in South America as opposed to only 2% in Oceania. The percentages of the Central America, Asia and Oceania is just under 20%.

Regarding the consumption of coffee, 55% of coffee is sold to Europe while the other regions consume around a third of the total (27%). In comparison, there is 11% of coffee consumed in North America, which is higher than the figure for Japan, at 7%.

Shippers receive most of the profit from selling this type of product, at 55% compared to that of sellers, at 25%. Both explorers and producers earn an equal percentage of profits, at 10%.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...an equal percentage of profits, at 10%.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, regarding, so, third, whereas, while

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 7.0 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 6.8 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.15609756098 127% => OK
Pronoun: 6.0 5.60731707317 107% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 33.7804878049 95% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.97073170732 76% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 804.0 965.302439024 83% => OK
No of words: 164.0 196.424390244 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.90243902439 4.92477711251 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.57858190836 3.73543355544 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.58153766278 2.65546596893 97% => OK
Unique words: 100.0 106.607317073 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.609756097561 0.547539520022 111% => OK
syllable_count: 246.6 283.868780488 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.33902439024 69% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 3.36585365854 178% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 8.94146341463 101% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 22.4926829268 80% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 21.0982416914 43.030603864 49% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 89.3333333333 112.824112599 79% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.2222222222 22.9334400587 79% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.66666666667 5.23603664747 108% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 3.83414634146 130% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 3.70975609756 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.09268292683 122% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.228133324441 0.215688989381 106% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0936932753541 0.103423049105 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.100943503749 0.0843802449381 120% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.138026307712 0.15604864568 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.117934321095 0.0819641961636 144% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.8 13.2329268293 82% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 61.2550243902 101% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 10.3012195122 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.14 11.4140731707 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.48 8.06136585366 105% => OK
difficult_words: 41.0 40.7170731707 101% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 11.4329268293 74% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.9970731707 84% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Maximum four paragraphs wanted.

Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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