The diagram below shows the life cycle of the kiwi (animal)
The diagram illustrates various stages in life of the kiwi. Overall, there are 10 stages in the transformation of kiwi, from birth to maturity.
The life cycle of kiwi begins with the laying of an egg by the female kiwi. Kiwi eggs are quite large, accounting for about 20% of the female’s body. After that, the eggs are incubated and after a certain length of time, the eggs start breaking. Once the egg hatches, a small and fluffy kiwi chick emerges. At that time, it is incredibly vulnerable at this stage and relies on its parents for protection and care. For several weeks, the hatchling can stand up, gradually growing stronger and more independent. However, at that time, kiwi was too young to protect itself from enemies so that’s why 95% of kiwi chicks are killed by stoats in their first six months of life. Following this, when it enters the juvenile stage, it starts venturing out of the burrow, exploring its surroundings, and learning essential survival skills from its father. After learning some necessary skills, the chick leaves parents’ territory.
During the seventh stage of the life cycle, when the males are 2 - 5 years old, the females are 3 - 5 years old, the kiwi transitions into the adult stage and establishes its territory. The next step is when it is fully independent and ready to breed. In the subsequent stage, the adult kiwi finds a mate, and engages in the breeding process. After that, a couple of kiwi dig a burrow, build the nest and start the reproductive process. Female kiwis typically lay one or two eggs per breeding season. Once the final stage has been completed, the life begins anew.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 355, Rule ID: A_LOT_OF_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun kiwi seems to be countable; consider using: 'a couple of kiwis'.
Suggestion: a couple of kiwis
...es in the breeding process. After that, a couple of kiwi dig a burrow, build the nest and start ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, however, if, so, as to
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 7.0 157% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 6.8 162% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 3.15609756098 253% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 17.0 5.60731707317 303% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 37.0 33.7804878049 110% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.97073170732 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1354.0 965.302439024 140% => OK
No of words: 283.0 196.424390244 144% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.78445229682 4.92477711251 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.10153676581 3.73543355544 110% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.5265350782 2.65546596893 95% => OK
Unique words: 165.0 106.607317073 155% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.583038869258 0.547539520022 106% => OK
syllable_count: 412.2 283.868780488 145% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 13.0 4.33902439024 300% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 5.0 1.07073170732 467% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.482926829268 414% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 8.0 3.36585365854 238% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 8.94146341463 190% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 22.4926829268 71% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 38.9543251304 43.030603864 91% => OK
Chars per sentence: 79.6470588235 112.824112599 71% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.6470588235 22.9334400587 73% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.70588235294 5.23603664747 33% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 3.0 3.83414634146 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 3.70975609756 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 11.0 4.09268292683 269% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.199940017596 0.215688989381 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0752500800011 0.103423049105 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0890133844416 0.0843802449381 105% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.161310659603 0.15604864568 103% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0434320774271 0.0819641961636 53% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.4 13.2329268293 71% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 63.7 61.2550243902 104% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 10.3012195122 82% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.15 11.4140731707 89% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.39 8.06136585366 104% => OK
difficult_words: 71.0 40.7170731707 174% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 11.4329268293 61% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.9970731707 76% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 355, Rule ID: A_LOT_OF_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun kiwi seems to be countable; consider using: 'a couple of kiwis'.
Suggestion: a couple of kiwis
...es in the breeding process. After that, a couple of kiwi dig a burrow, build the nest and start ...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, however, if, so, as to
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 7.0 157% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 6.8 162% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 3.15609756098 253% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 17.0 5.60731707317 303% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 37.0 33.7804878049 110% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.97073170732 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1354.0 965.302439024 140% => OK
No of words: 283.0 196.424390244 144% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.78445229682 4.92477711251 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.10153676581 3.73543355544 110% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.5265350782 2.65546596893 95% => OK
Unique words: 165.0 106.607317073 155% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.583038869258 0.547539520022 106% => OK
syllable_count: 412.2 283.868780488 145% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 13.0 4.33902439024 300% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 5.0 1.07073170732 467% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.482926829268 414% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 8.0 3.36585365854 238% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 8.94146341463 190% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 22.4926829268 71% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 38.9543251304 43.030603864 91% => OK
Chars per sentence: 79.6470588235 112.824112599 71% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.6470588235 22.9334400587 73% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.70588235294 5.23603664747 33% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 3.0 3.83414634146 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 3.70975609756 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 11.0 4.09268292683 269% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.199940017596 0.215688989381 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0752500800011 0.103423049105 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0890133844416 0.0843802449381 105% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.161310659603 0.15604864568 103% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0434320774271 0.0819641961636 53% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.4 13.2329268293 71% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 63.7 61.2550243902 104% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 10.3012195122 82% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.15 11.4140731707 89% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.39 8.06136585366 104% => OK
difficult_words: 71.0 40.7170731707 174% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 11.4329268293 61% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.9970731707 76% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.