Nowadays, a lot of companies switch to open offices. Do the advantages outweigh its disadvantages?
It is true that in recent days, the open-plan offices are replaced by the partially enclosed office workspaces. Personally, I would contend that the benefits do outweigh the drawbacks.
There are innumerable reasons why people might disapprove of changing to the open workplace.The first objection is that working in the barrierless office design easily makes people lose focus. It starts from the phone ringing, colleague conversation, co-workers congregating or even the sound of a keyboard. When combined, it will create an extremely annoying sound for everyone around, which would in turn reduce their work efficiency. Another justification is that wall-less workspaces are an ideal environment for the transmission of illnesses. For example, although Covid-19 is still complicated, most people also have to go to work. Therefore, should a workplace don’t have a partition to limit people's direct contact with each other, Covid pandemic will spread faster and faster and endanger staff.
Inspite of the downsides mentioned above, I believe that open-plan offices with no partitions on the desk is a positive measure for the companies. First and foremost, a shared office space can facilitate communication and collaboration. An open workplace allows employees to communicate with each other whenever they want, thereby creating a friendly communal work environment. This would therefore build camaraderie between colleagues and from that, they can easily share, discuss and find a common opinion. It should also be noted that tearing down cubicle walls can slash some costs. Although the cost of installing partitions isn’t a big sum for big business, it is a big amount of money for medium or small organizations because this money can do a lot of other activities to develop the enterprise. Moreover, the entity can save cost on amenities and requisites such as printers, documents cabinets, and so on.
In sum, it seems to me that a workplace with no defined boundaries such as walls or barriers is advantageous in a variety of ways.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, if, moreover, so, still, therefore, for example, such as, it is true
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 7.85571142285 165% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 41.998997996 81% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1728.0 1615.20841683 107% => OK
No of words: 323.0 315.596192385 102% => OK
Chars per words: 5.34984520124 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.23936324884 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.00696504775 2.80592935109 107% => OK
Unique words: 201.0 176.041082164 114% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.622291021672 0.561755894193 111% => OK
syllable_count: 534.6 506.74238477 105% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 5.43587174349 184% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 38.9113074022 49.4020404114 79% => OK
Chars per sentence: 108.0 106.682146367 101% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.1875 20.7667163134 97% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.0625 7.06120827912 72% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.121079568511 0.244688304435 49% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0384922663308 0.084324248473 46% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0471556432788 0.0667982634062 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0893187828594 0.151304729494 59% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0705967369721 0.056905535591 124% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.9 13.0946893788 106% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.72 50.2224549098 85% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.75 12.4159519038 111% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.81 8.58950901804 114% => OK
difficult_words: 106.0 78.4519038076 135% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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