The diagram below shows the life cycle of a salmon, from egg to adult fish.
The diagram depicts the stages in the life of a salmon, from an egg to mature fish.
It can be clearly seen that there are 6 distinct steps in which a salmon develops from egg to adult. Furthermore, we can notice that the life cycle takes place in three environments: freshwater, estuary, and ocean and back to the start.
The life cycle of a salmon begins when the adult spawns the eggs, after which the eggs are incubated for a particular amount of time. When the salmon hatch from their eggs, the young salmon spend the first part of their existence rearing in freshwater, before swimming downstream to continue rearing in the estuary areas.
In the next stage of the process, the salmon migrate to the ocean, where they fully grow and become adults. The cycle then repeats itself when the mature fish make their way back upstream to their breeding grounds.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, furthermore, if, then
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 7.0 43% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 1.00243902439 200% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 6.8 44% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 8.0 3.15609756098 253% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 10.0 5.60731707317 178% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 22.0 33.7804878049 65% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.97073170732 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 714.0 965.302439024 74% => OK
No of words: 152.0 196.424390244 77% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.69736842105 4.92477711251 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.51124308557 3.73543355544 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.29245873158 2.65546596893 86% => OK
Unique words: 90.0 106.607317073 84% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.592105263158 0.547539520022 108% => OK
syllable_count: 211.5 283.868780488 75% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 5.0 4.33902439024 115% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.07073170732 280% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 3.36585365854 119% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 8.94146341463 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 22.4926829268 93% => OK
Sentence length SD: 31.6221312323 43.030603864 73% => OK
Chars per sentence: 102.0 112.824112599 90% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.7142857143 22.9334400587 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.0 5.23603664747 76% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 3.70975609756 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.09268292683 98% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.379001932554 0.215688989381 176% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.17586086709 0.103423049105 170% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.126055984648 0.0843802449381 149% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.2456390422 0.15604864568 157% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.119183324137 0.0819641961636 145% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.6 13.2329268293 88% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 67.08 61.2550243902 110% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 10.3012195122 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.98 11.4140731707 87% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.11 8.06136585366 101% => OK
difficult_words: 33.0 40.7170731707 81% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 11.4329268293 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.9970731707 95% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 11.0658536585 90% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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