The diagram below shows the life cycle of the salmon.
Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The diagram illustrates the principal stages in salmons’ life span. Overall, it can be seen that the salmon’s life cycle has in total 7 phase of maturing from eggs to fully-developed fishes.
At the first stage of the circulation, eggs coming from the mother will be hatch in fresh water for approximately 3 months then soon would be grown into alevin, which obtain the remaining yolk-sac as its nourishments. The next step begins when all the yolk-sac completely disappears after a few weeks, it, then, turn into a fry that was estimated to be 5-10 weeks old and was capable of swimming. Subsequently, after several months, a pattern called ‘finger’ markings appeares on its body and at this phase, the salmon was called parr.
Next, at 1-3 years old, smolts will form a cluster then emigrate to the ocean. After spending at least one year in the ocean, the salmon then will be considered as an adult salmon. Finally, the salmon’s biorythmn will started over again after its 2 weeks of spawning and passed away.
- Nowadays celebrities increasingly have the status of role models in particular for younger people Do you see this as a positive or negative development 89
- The diagram below shows the life cycle of the salmon Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant 92
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 137, Rule ID: CD_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun 'phase' seems to be countable, so consider using: 'phases'.
Suggestion: phases
... the salmon’s life cycle has in total 7 phase of maturing from eggs to fully-develope...
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Line 5, column 219, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[1]
Message: The verb 'will' requires the base form of the verb: 'start'
Suggestion: start
...n. Finally, the salmon’s biorythmn will started over again after its 2 weeks of spawnin...
^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
finally, first, if, so, then, at least
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.0 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 1.00243902439 599% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 3.0 6.8 44% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.15609756098 127% => OK
Pronoun: 7.0 5.60731707317 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 25.0 33.7804878049 74% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.97073170732 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 856.0 965.302439024 89% => OK
No of words: 175.0 196.424390244 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.89142857143 4.92477711251 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.63713576256 3.73543355544 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.72154817885 2.65546596893 102% => OK
Unique words: 119.0 106.607317073 112% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.68 0.547539520022 124% => OK
syllable_count: 244.8 283.868780488 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 6.0 4.33902439024 138% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 3.36585365854 119% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 8.94146341463 89% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 22.4926829268 93% => OK
Sentence length SD: 47.3073395468 43.030603864 110% => OK
Chars per sentence: 107.0 112.824112599 95% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.875 22.9334400587 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.75 5.23603664747 91% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 3.83414634146 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 2.0 1.69756097561 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 3.70975609756 27% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.09268292683 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0841159471332 0.215688989381 39% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.051233313412 0.103423049105 50% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.057127689968 0.0843802449381 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0801762955301 0.15604864568 51% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0700830278813 0.0819641961636 86% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.5 13.2329268293 94% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 67.08 61.2550243902 110% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 10.3012195122 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.08 11.4140731707 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.92 8.06136585366 111% => OK
difficult_words: 47.0 40.7170731707 115% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 11.4329268293 122% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.9970731707 95% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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