The diagram below shows the manufacturing process for making sugar from sugar cane

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The diagram below shows the manufacturing process for making sugar from sugar cane.

The flow chart details how sugar is manufactured from sugar cane.

Overall, the process consists of seven complicated stages, commencing with the growing of sugar canes and culminating in the drying and cooling step. It can be seen that this is a capital intensive process, involving a number of different tools and machines.

To begin, sugar canes are cultivated from 1 to 1.5 years before they are ready for harvest. This step can be completed in two ways, either manually by hand or by using an industrial reaper.

Afterwards, the canes are machine-pressed to extract juice. This liquid is then passed to a limestone filter to eliminate any unwanted substance. In the next step, the purified juice is subject to evaporation, in which it is put under heat until becoming syrup. Subsequently, the syrup is transferred into a centrifuge, which separates the solid sugar crystals from the liquid by rotating the fluid at high speed. Finally, the sugar is dried and cooled in a metal container, ready for packaging to enter the market.

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Transition Words or Phrases used:
finally, if, so, then

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 7.0 171% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 1.00243902439 200% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 6.8 74% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.15609756098 95% => OK
Pronoun: 7.0 5.60731707317 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 27.0 33.7804878049 80% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.97073170732 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 872.0 965.302439024 90% => OK
No of words: 173.0 196.424390244 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.04046242775 4.92477711251 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.62669911048 3.73543355544 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.82507022063 2.65546596893 106% => OK
Unique words: 114.0 106.607317073 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.658959537572 0.547539520022 120% => OK
syllable_count: 270.0 283.868780488 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.45097560976 110% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 1.53170731707 196% => OK
Article: 6.0 4.33902439024 138% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 3.36585365854 89% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 8.94146341463 112% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 22.4926829268 76% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 29.101374538 43.030603864 68% => OK
Chars per sentence: 87.2 112.824112599 77% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.3 22.9334400587 75% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.1 5.23603664747 40% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 3.70975609756 162% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.09268292683 73% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.324904297005 0.215688989381 151% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.123228163108 0.103423049105 119% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.12970602112 0.0843802449381 154% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.222798200634 0.15604864568 143% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.112831267533 0.0819641961636 138% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.0 13.2329268293 83% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 61.2550243902 89% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 10.3012195122 96% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.66 11.4140731707 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.04 8.06136585366 112% => OK
difficult_words: 50.0 40.7170731707 123% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 11.4329268293 61% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.9970731707 80% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 11.0658536585 90% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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