Some people think playing computer games is bad for children on everything. Others think it has some positive on the way children develop. Discuss both sides and give your opinion.
With the invention of the computer, computer games also became popular among children slowly. Some people are of the opinion that these games are detrimental to children's mental health, while others believe that they play a positive role in the development of children's facilities. In my opinion, excess of everything can be harmful and playing computer games in moderation contribute to the children's growth.
The opposition against computer games is due to their violent nature and their apparent uselessness. People think that playing games waste children's time and that time can be used to do something productive. Computer games have become increasingly violent in recent years and it has made the parents uneasy and they are reluctant to expose their children to violence. There are scientific findings suggesting that children exposed to violence at a young age tend to have violent behaviour.
On the other hand, some people are more open minded about computer games and consider them a way to establish a child's hand and eye coordination and also allow him to make decisions at an early age. It is scientifically proven that computer games increase reflexes and also improves hand and eye coordination. Developing these essential skills at a young age would help the child in the future in physical activities like catching and throwing. Decisions made in the games teach the children about the actions and their consequences.
I believe that computer games that are too addictive do take a lot of children's valuable time that can be utilized for other useful purposes. However, children should play computer games as there are benefits attached to them. It is the parents' responsibility to limit the playing time of their children and keep an eye on the age restriction mentioned on each game to protect the children from harmful content.
In conclusion, playing computer games does provide advantages to children, but it can also be harmful to children's mental health.
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- My essay 11
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 238, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'parents'' or 'parent's'?
Suggestion: parents'; parent's
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, so, while, in conclusion, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 24.0651302605 112% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 41.998997996 100% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1671.0 1615.20841683 103% => OK
No of words: 321.0 315.596192385 102% => OK
Chars per words: 5.20560747664 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.23278547379 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.77854028218 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 163.0 176.041082164 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.507788161994 0.561755894193 90% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 527.4 506.74238477 104% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 35.5667760073 49.4020404114 72% => OK
Chars per sentence: 111.4 106.682146367 104% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.4 20.7667163134 103% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.46666666667 7.06120827912 77% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.382074881175 0.244688304435 156% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.141122194712 0.084324248473 167% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0824054844035 0.0667982634062 123% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.231362789606 0.151304729494 153% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0842355211165 0.056905535591 148% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.8 13.0946893788 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 50.2224549098 100% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.94 12.4159519038 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.47 8.58950901804 99% => OK
difficult_words: 77.0 78.4519038076 98% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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