The diagram below shows the process of collecting rain water for use in an Australian town.
Above diagram illustrate how drinking water is produced from rain water in an Australian town. Overall, there are four main stags in the transformation of rainwater into drinking water, where as the process begins with collecting the rainwater from houses and ends with treating the water with chemicals.
First of all, rain water is collected through the gutters of each and every house’s rooftop and travels through the vertical pipes to reach the drain. after that, collected water is passed to the water filter to undergo filtration, where a large amount of dust particles and impurities are removed from the water.
In the next stage, we can clearly see that the purified water is transferred to the underground water storage. Following this, the stored water is treated with chemical to eliminate the germs and infections. Finally, the water which comes after the treatment with chemicals, travels through the pipes to all the houses for public consumption.
- The diagram below shows the process of collecting rain water for use in an Australian town. 89
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- The bar chart below gives information about vehicle ownerships in China Write a report for a university lecturer describing the information 89
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 187, Rule ID: WHERE_AS[1]
Message: Did you mean 'whereas'?
Suggestion: whereas
...ation of rainwater into drinking water, where as the process begins with collecting the ...
^^^^^^^^
Line 5, column 157, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: After
... the vertical pipes to reach the drain. after that, collected water is passed to the ...
^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
finally, first, if, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.0 100% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 6.8 74% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.15609756098 158% => OK
Pronoun: 4.0 5.60731707317 71% => OK
Preposition: 28.0 33.7804878049 83% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.97073170732 101% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 823.0 965.302439024 85% => OK
No of words: 156.0 196.424390244 79% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.27564102564 4.92477711251 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.53411884305 3.73543355544 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.6467684016 2.65546596893 100% => OK
Unique words: 94.0 106.607317073 88% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.602564102564 0.547539520022 110% => OK
syllable_count: 241.2 283.868780488 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.33902439024 46% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 3.36585365854 89% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 8.94146341463 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 22.4926829268 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 38.546552825 43.030603864 90% => OK
Chars per sentence: 117.571428571 112.824112599 104% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.2857142857 22.9334400587 97% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.57142857143 5.23603664747 87% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 3.83414634146 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 2.0 1.69756097561 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 3.70975609756 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.09268292683 122% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.282062738681 0.215688989381 131% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.134076595804 0.103423049105 130% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.097175530015 0.0843802449381 115% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.18875451271 0.15604864568 121% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0691068483961 0.0819641961636 84% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.6 13.2329268293 110% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 57.61 61.2550243902 94% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 10.3012195122 104% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.64 11.4140731707 120% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.48 8.06136585366 118% => OK
difficult_words: 47.0 40.7170731707 115% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 11.4329268293 114% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.9970731707 98% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.0658536585 99% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.