The diagram illustrates the method by which an Australian town harvests water from rain for the purpose of drinking.
Overall, there are five steps involved in this process which includes collection, filtration, storage, water treatment and distribution.
In the first step, rainwater falling on the slanting roof top of each house enters a gutter and flows to reach an underground drain through separate drainage pipes of each house. This drained water from rain then passes through a water filtration unit, which clears it of particulate impurities in the second step. Once the water has been filtered, it is stored in a storage tank in the following step.
Stored water is then carried to the water treatment tank through a pipe connecting both the tanks. After which, the water is treated with chemicals to render it safe for drinking. Finally, after the water is made potable, it is distributed back to all the houses in the same town by a separate supply pipeline, where people can use it for daily consumption.
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- the bar chart shows the global sales (in billions of dollars) of different types of digital games between 2000 and 2006. 78
- The diagram shows rainwater is collected for the use of drinking water in an Australian town. 84
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, finally, first, second, then
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.0 100% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 2.0 6.8 29% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.15609756098 158% => OK
Pronoun: 7.0 5.60731707317 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 25.0 33.7804878049 74% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 3.97073170732 151% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 857.0 965.302439024 89% => OK
No of words: 170.0 196.424390244 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.04117647059 4.92477711251 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.61087313685 3.73543355544 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.6533585168 2.65546596893 100% => OK
Unique words: 104.0 106.607317073 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.611764705882 0.547539520022 112% => OK
syllable_count: 255.6 283.868780488 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 1.53170731707 196% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.33902439024 46% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 3.36585365854 89% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 8.94146341463 89% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 22.4926829268 93% => OK
Sentence length SD: 35.367490369 43.030603864 82% => OK
Chars per sentence: 107.125 112.824112599 95% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.25 22.9334400587 93% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.125 5.23603664747 79% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 3.70975609756 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.09268292683 122% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.263998367546 0.215688989381 122% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.114018493565 0.103423049105 110% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0853002593659 0.0843802449381 101% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.166178165937 0.15604864568 106% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.105134725944 0.0819641961636 128% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.9 13.2329268293 97% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 61.2550243902 96% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 10.3012195122 100% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.95 11.4140731707 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.04 8.06136585366 112% => OK
difficult_words: 47.0 40.7170731707 115% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 11.4329268293 96% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.9970731707 95% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.0658536585 99% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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