The diagram below shows the process of growing and preparing pineapples and pineapple products.
Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The diagram illustrate how pineapples are grown and processed.
Overall, this process can be divided into two main steps, which are farming and processing. Eventually, the pineapples products turn into a drink, a canned box or an export.
First, pineapples are grown into field with their crowns space 26 centimetres apart, and in the climate where the temperature ranged between 23 and 30 degrees Celsius. After being planted 7 months, ethylene is sprayed on pineapples. Next, plants continue to grow more 5 months before being harvested.
Second, the process continues with the harvested pineapples being sorted according to their sizes after being washed. Once sorted, the smallest and medium-sized pineapples have their tops and rinds removed. While the former pineapples are put in to extractor to collect their fluid, the latter are cut into slices or smaller chunks, before being canned in steel boxes. On the other hand, the largest pineapples are sprayed by wax, placed in creates and exported abroad.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, second, so, while, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 7.0 186% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 6.8 132% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.15609756098 63% => OK
Pronoun: 5.0 5.60731707317 89% => OK
Preposition: 22.0 33.7804878049 65% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 3.97073170732 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 855.0 965.302439024 89% => OK
No of words: 161.0 196.424390244 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.31055900621 4.92477711251 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.56210296601 3.73543355544 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.59124598709 2.65546596893 98% => OK
Unique words: 108.0 106.607317073 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.670807453416 0.547539520022 123% => OK
syllable_count: 243.0 283.868780488 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 7.0 4.33902439024 161% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.07073170732 280% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 3.36585365854 89% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 8.94146341463 112% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 22.4926829268 71% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 35.9354977703 43.030603864 84% => OK
Chars per sentence: 85.5 112.824112599 76% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.1 22.9334400587 70% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.3 5.23603664747 82% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 3.70975609756 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.09268292683 171% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.181599527053 0.215688989381 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0749512307995 0.103423049105 72% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0405190896906 0.0843802449381 48% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.119826692091 0.15604864568 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0291041096431 0.0819641961636 36% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.6 13.2329268293 88% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 63.7 61.2550243902 104% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 10.3012195122 82% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.22 11.4140731707 116% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.24 8.06136585366 115% => OK
difficult_words: 49.0 40.7170731707 120% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 11.4329268293 57% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.9970731707 76% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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