some people believe that a crime is a result of social problems and poverty, others think that crime is a result of bad person's nature. Discuss both view and give your opinion.
There is a debate surrounding the root causes of crime, with some asserting that it is a result of an individual's inherent nature, while others argue that it is primarily influenced by social problems and poverty. Personally, I support the viewpoint that attributes crime to social issues and poverty.
On one hand, proponents of the notion that criminal activities are a result of an individual's nature believe that certain personality traits can predispose individuals to engage in unlawful behavior. This can be observed from early adolescence when children who exhibit aggressive and arrogant attitudes are more likely to get involved in fights and eventually turn to crime. For instance, according to a Daily Mail article, juveniles who bully their classmates have a 50% higher chance of engaging in criminal acts later in life compared to their well-behaved peers.
On the other hand, social issues and poverty serve as catalysts for criminal activities in society. Firstly, high rates of unemployment contribute significantly to the rise in crime. When individuals lack gainful employment or stable income sources, they may resort to illegal means to make ends meet. Consequently, areas with rampant unemployment often witness a surge in criminal incidents as people are forced into illicit activities as a means of survival. Slums such as Rio de Janeiro and New Delhi are notorious for their high crime rates due to pervasive poverty and limited job opportunities.
Secondly, impoverished individuals may be driven towards criminality out of desperation for their families' well-being during challenging times. The pressure to provide for loved ones amid financial hardships can lead people down a path where they feel compelled to commit crimes as an alternate source of income.
In conclusion, while some may argue that an individual's innate characteristics play a role in determining criminal behavior, I firmly believe that societal factors such as social issues and poverty bear greater responsibility for the prevalence of crime. Unemployment and poverty create an environment ripe for criminal activities as individuals seek ways to survive or support their families. Therefore, addressing these social problems and reducing poverty levels should be central to crime prevention strategies in order to build a more exemplary society.
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Suggestion: individuals'; individual's
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Suggestion: one's
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, consequently, first, firstly, if, may, second, secondly, so, therefore, well, while, for instance, in conclusion, such as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 7.30460921844 164% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 45.0 41.998997996 107% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1997.0 1615.20841683 124% => OK
No of words: 362.0 315.596192385 115% => OK
Chars per words: 5.51657458564 5.12529762239 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.36191444098 4.20363070211 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.03306992017 2.80592935109 108% => OK
Unique words: 215.0 176.041082164 122% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.593922651934 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 648.0 506.74238477 128% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 46.3338609083 49.4020404114 94% => OK
Chars per sentence: 133.133333333 106.682146367 125% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.1333333333 20.7667163134 116% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.66666666667 7.06120827912 137% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 8.67935871743 23% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 13.0 3.9879759519 326% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.220117808338 0.244688304435 90% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0761975972885 0.084324248473 90% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.060339457509 0.0667982634062 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.128753784699 0.151304729494 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0644675447452 0.056905535591 113% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.6 13.0946893788 127% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 30.2 50.2224549098 60% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.0 11.3001002004 133% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.03 12.4159519038 121% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.06 8.58950901804 117% => OK
difficult_words: 120.0 78.4519038076 153% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.0 9.78957915832 153% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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