The diagram below shows the process of plastic bottle production

Essay topics:

The diagram below shows the process of plastic bottle production.

The flow chart demonstrates how plastic bottle is manufactured. Overall, the process of producing plastic bottle involves five stages , commencing with melt the preform of plastic on hat by the blaster, followed by constituting the form of bottle by pumping air into the shaping machine over the needle, culminating with inject pressurized air.
Initially, it begans with melt the natural form of plastic in the extruder machine with the locker above the machine. As soon as the plastic become a fliud, but it still form in shape by itself, the forming appliance on account of keep the plastic in bottle's model. Before the preform plastic become rougher, it will be pumped with air so as to expand the large of this design. Once the bottle is formed, the shaping appliance stops their work.
In the subsequent step, the bottle which is full of air will be separated from the machine. Finally, the plastic bottle using in our daily life is modeled after five steps with the support of machine

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 134, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...cing plastic bottle involves five stages , commencing with melt the preform of pla...
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Line 1, column 158, Rule ID: A_INFINITVE[1]
Message: Probably a wrong construction: a/the + infinitive
...lves five stages , commencing with melt the preform of plastic on hat by the blaster, follo...
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Line 2, column 171, Rule ID: IT_VBZ[1]
Message: Did you mean 'forms'?
Suggestion: forms
...he plastic become a fliud, but it still form in shape by itself, the forming applian...
^^^^
Line 2, column 274, Rule ID: A_INFINITVE[1]
Message: Probably a wrong construction: a/the + infinitive
...ep the plastic in bottles model. Before the preform plastic become rougher, it will be pump...
^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 2, column 337, Rule ID: SO_AS_TO[1]
Message: Use simply 'to'
Suggestion: to
...ome rougher, it will be pumped with air so as to expand the large of this design. Once t...
^^^^^^^^

Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, finally, if, so, still, as to

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.0 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 1.00243902439 200% => OK
Conjunction : 1.0 6.8 15% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.15609756098 32% => OK
Pronoun: 7.0 5.60731707317 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 31.0 33.7804878049 92% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.97073170732 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 824.0 965.302439024 85% => OK
No of words: 169.0 196.424390244 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.87573964497 4.92477711251 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.60555127546 3.73543355544 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.48371860956 2.65546596893 94% => OK
Unique words: 94.0 106.607317073 88% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.556213017751 0.547539520022 102% => OK
syllable_count: 252.0 283.868780488 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 6.0 4.33902439024 138% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 3.36585365854 59% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 8.94146341463 89% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 22.4926829268 93% => OK
Sentence length SD: 64.7432428907 43.030603864 150% => OK
Chars per sentence: 103.0 112.824112599 91% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.125 22.9334400587 92% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.25 5.23603664747 81% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 3.83414634146 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 5.0 1.69756097561 295% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 3.70975609756 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.09268292683 73% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.22086246119 0.215688989381 102% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.107048146093 0.103423049105 104% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0512548792752 0.0843802449381 61% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.163645836101 0.15604864568 105% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0451038576652 0.0819641961636 55% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.1 13.2329268293 91% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 61.2550243902 96% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 10.3012195122 100% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.02 11.4140731707 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.6 8.06136585366 107% => OK
difficult_words: 42.0 40.7170731707 103% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 11.4329268293 122% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.9970731707 95% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.0658536585 99% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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