The diagram below shows the process of recycling paper

Essay topics:

The diagram below shows the process of recycling paper.

The diagrammatic representation delineates the stages involved in the making of used paper.

Initially, in the first stage of the process, used papers are dropped in the vat that contains a mixture of water and chemical, with the help of a conveyor belt which converts it into pulp. this pulp is then passed into a barrel with holes that separates impurities from the pulp that stay behind into the barrel.

Once the pulp has been filtered, it is cleaned in a container of an amalgamation of water and soap. Air is simultaneously added with the help of an air pump that is connected to the container. This in turns removes the ink from the concoction. In the final stage, the cleaned pulp is rolled together with water in a heated roller. Thus, the clean de-inked recycled paper rolls are obtained.

Overall, it can be seen that the recycling of paper is done in four main stages. Beginning with the worn papers turned into pulp and culminates by the clean paper rolls procured.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 191, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: This
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Line 9, column 33, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...l. Once the pulp has been filtered, it is cleaned in a container of an amalg...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, so, then, thus

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 7.0 143% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 6.8 44% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 3.15609756098 190% => OK
Pronoun: 10.0 5.60731707317 178% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 31.0 33.7804878049 92% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.97073170732 76% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 828.0 965.302439024 86% => OK
No of words: 172.0 196.424390244 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.81395348837 4.92477711251 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.62144681703 3.73543355544 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.62342692828 2.65546596893 99% => OK
Unique words: 96.0 106.607317073 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.558139534884 0.547539520022 102% => OK
syllable_count: 249.3 283.868780488 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 1.53170731707 261% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 3.0 4.33902439024 69% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 3.36585365854 89% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 8.94146341463 112% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 22.4926829268 76% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 36.4308934834 43.030603864 85% => OK
Chars per sentence: 82.8 112.824112599 73% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.2 22.9334400587 75% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.1 5.23603664747 40% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 1.69756097561 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 3.70975609756 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.09268292683 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.14018859999 0.215688989381 65% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0628304959166 0.103423049105 61% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0669479775437 0.0843802449381 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0968429711832 0.15604864568 62% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0534154924228 0.0819641961636 65% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.8 13.2329268293 74% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 71.14 61.2550243902 116% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 10.3012195122 74% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.32 11.4140731707 90% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.52 8.06136585366 106% => OK
difficult_words: 44.0 40.7170731707 108% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 11.4329268293 101% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.9970731707 80% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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