The diagram below shows the production of electricity using a system called Ocean Thermal Energy Conversion (OTEC).
The figure illustrates the how the electricity generation by ocean thermal Energy conversion system.
overall, it is clear that this system consists of main components such as a condensing chamber, evaporation chamber and turbine with supply system.
This system process starts at solar energy from sun. this energy converts sea water to water vapour and this pass through the chamber of evaporation which is saltness water vapour goes to the upper entry portion of turbine then rotate its blades. The electricity generates while this rotation takes place. after process of turbine rotation, the semi water vapour from turbine pass to the condensing chamber.
The phase changing process of vapour to water. the semi water vapour condensed while seawater circulated around which the chamber consists of a vapour.
The conversion of vapour to water takes place and used as drinking water. however, the salt water as a waste is sent out from chamber.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, so, then, while, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 7.0 43% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 6.8 44% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.15609756098 95% => OK
Pronoun: 8.0 5.60731707317 143% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 22.0 33.7804878049 65% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 3.97073170732 151% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 816.0 965.302439024 85% => OK
No of words: 152.0 196.424390244 77% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.36842105263 4.92477711251 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.51124308557 3.73543355544 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.48583243218 2.65546596893 94% => OK
Unique words: 82.0 106.607317073 77% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.539473684211 0.547539520022 99% => OK
syllable_count: 248.4 283.868780488 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.45097560976 110% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 1.53170731707 196% => OK
Article: 7.0 4.33902439024 161% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 3.36585365854 30% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 8.94146341463 112% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 22.4926829268 67% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 44.5829563847 43.030603864 104% => OK
Chars per sentence: 81.6 112.824112599 72% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.2 22.9334400587 66% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.3 5.23603664747 63% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 3.83414634146 130% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 8.0 1.69756097561 471% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 3.70975609756 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.09268292683 122% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.125867416754 0.215688989381 58% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.070984020991 0.103423049105 69% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.104228186634 0.0843802449381 124% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.110565110122 0.15604864568 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.127850311827 0.0819641961636 156% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.5 13.2329268293 87% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 56.25 61.2550243902 92% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 10.3012195122 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.27 11.4140731707 116% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.54 8.06136585366 106% => OK
difficult_words: 40.0 40.7170731707 98% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 11.4329268293 74% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.9970731707 73% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum four paragraphs wanted.
More content wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.