The diagram below shows the recycling process of aluminium cans.
Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The diagram illiustrates the recycling methods of Aluminium cans. Overall, the whole recycling process consists of around seven stages where used cans are collected and then converted in the form of sheets after that those cans are send to the various companies, to put them in use as per their product requirement.
At first stage used cans are collected by a Garbage truck and then those cans are send for the sorting and cleaning in order to remove the smell and dirt. After which they are shredded and compressed. Moreover, as we know that aluminium is malleable it is further heated and melted to reshape.
Furthermore, rolls are made of Aluminium sheets from melted metal liquid whose thickness varied from 2.5mm to 6 mm. Last but not least those sheets are send to multifarious beverages industries where they are transformed into desired shapes. In fact, in the United Kingdom 74 % of the cans are recycled ones.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
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Suggestion: sent
...m of sheets after that those cans are send to the various companies, to put them i...
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Suggestion: sent
...a Garbage truck and then those cans are send for the sorting and cleaning in order...
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...uck and then those cans are send for the sorting and cleaning in order to remove...
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...hen those cans are send for the sorting and cleaning in order to remove the smel...
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...mm. Last but not least those sheets are send to multifarious beverages industries wh...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, furthermore, if, moreover, so, then, in fact
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 7.0 157% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 6.8 103% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 3.15609756098 190% => OK
Pronoun: 11.0 5.60731707317 196% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 24.0 33.7804878049 71% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.97073170732 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 770.0 965.302439024 80% => OK
No of words: 156.0 196.424390244 79% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.9358974359 4.92477711251 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.53411884305 3.73543355544 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.57081931133 2.65546596893 97% => OK
Unique words: 99.0 106.607317073 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.634615384615 0.547539520022 116% => OK
syllable_count: 234.0 283.868780488 82% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.33902439024 46% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 3.36585365854 149% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 8.94146341463 89% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 22.4926829268 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 61.8505002001 43.030603864 144% => OK
Chars per sentence: 96.25 112.824112599 85% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.5 22.9334400587 85% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.0 5.23603664747 134% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 3.83414634146 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 6.0 1.69756097561 353% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 3.70975609756 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.09268292683 122% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.16449867113 0.215688989381 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.071140626776 0.103423049105 69% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0555267294622 0.0843802449381 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.111260006098 0.15604864568 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0509308641911 0.0819641961636 62% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.6 13.2329268293 88% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 61.2550243902 99% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 10.3012195122 92% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.37 11.4140731707 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.63 8.06136585366 107% => OK
difficult_words: 40.0 40.7170731707 98% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 11.4329268293 96% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.9970731707 87% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 11.0658536585 90% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.