The diagram below shows two different processes for manufacturing black tea.
Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The given diagram illustrates how black tea is produced in two ways.
Overall, what stands out from the diagram is that the process of manufacturing black tea consists of two main stages, namely harvesting and processing.
The first step begins with tea leaves being collected, which only allows buds and top leaves so as to produce the best quality tea. It is followed by the withering step in which the leaves are 60% dehumidified by the air from a fan.
Subsequently, depending on each type of tea, nearly dried tea leaves are divided into two methods, namely the traditional and the modern one. While the former is used for loose tea, the latter is dedicated to producing tea bags. Regarding the traditional method, after tea leaves are rolled until being flat and broken, enzymes can get out of them. Meanwhile, as for the modern method which is more rapid than the conventional one, once leaves are cut, torn and curled, smaller granular pieces are created.
It is followed by the oxidation and fermentation process, in which rolled leaves are put on tiles or cement. Then, enzymes, along with the air, allow leaves to turn into copper color. Finally, put into an oven or a hot air dryer, copper leaves fully evaporate and then, they give off flavor and scent.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 94, Rule ID: SO_AS_TO[1]
Message: Use simply 'to'
Suggestion: to
..., which only allows buds and top leaves so as to produce the best quality tea. It is fol...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
finally, first, if, regarding, so, then, while, as for, as to
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 7.0 214% => Less to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 6.8 147% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.15609756098 158% => OK
Pronoun: 5.0 5.60731707317 89% => OK
Preposition: 27.0 33.7804878049 80% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.97073170732 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1062.0 965.302439024 110% => OK
No of words: 219.0 196.424390244 111% => OK
Chars per words: 4.84931506849 4.92477711251 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.84690116678 3.73543355544 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.46539824941 2.65546596893 93% => OK
Unique words: 133.0 106.607317073 125% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.607305936073 0.547539520022 111% => OK
syllable_count: 324.9 283.868780488 114% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 1.53170731707 196% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.33902439024 69% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.07073170732 280% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 3.36585365854 119% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 8.94146341463 123% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 22.4926829268 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 28.6064779117 43.030603864 66% => OK
Chars per sentence: 96.5454545455 112.824112599 86% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.9090909091 22.9334400587 87% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.54545454545 5.23603664747 106% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 3.83414634146 130% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 3.70975609756 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.13902439024 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.09268292683 122% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.154522432776 0.215688989381 72% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0684196638182 0.103423049105 66% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0746098947332 0.0843802449381 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.11429737235 0.15604864568 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0839264391702 0.0819641961636 102% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.4 13.2329268293 86% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 61.2550243902 99% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 10.3012195122 92% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.85 11.4140731707 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.54 8.06136585366 106% => OK
difficult_words: 55.0 40.7170731707 135% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 11.4329268293 96% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.9970731707 87% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.0658536585 99% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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