Some countries have an ever-increasing proportion of the population who are aged 15 or younger. What do you think are the current and future effects of this trend for those countries?
Nowadays, there is a staggering rise in the population of youngsters aged under 15 in many nations. Therefore, people are according great importance to the effects that this trend may exert on these countries. From my perspective, the chances are that this booming population may give rise to both negative and positive effects on those countries.
First of all, regarding the current impact, the predominance of youngsters in the population cuts both ways. On the one hand, it is one of the culprits responsible for economic recession. Undoubtedly, youngsters are unable to make a living just with their immaturity and inexperience. This, in turn, wreaks havoc on the economy on a whole on the grounds that adults, which are the main workforce, are declining in number. On the other hand, this trend is beneficial. It stands to reason that youngsters can contribute greatly to the society thanks to their positive behaviors such as engagement in community services and voluntary work.
In terms of future influences, the upward trend in the proportion of young people is likely to do wonders for the whole country. There is no denying the fact that as long as the educational system is about to be changed for the better, youngsters can have an excellent background knowledge. As a result, along with the economic stability and financial support, the young workforce is expected to contribute greatly to technological advancement, economic situation and skilled labor, to name but a few. However, all of this can be for nothing if the country is unlikely to assure the instillation of good demeanors and mental support for youngsters. Consequently, the young may be susceptible to juvenile delinquency, which raises the crime rate.
In conclusion, although the rise in the younger population is advantageous to some certain extent, it may be at fault for other issues. Hence, many countries, depending on their economic situations and developments, should take into consideration carefully the pros and cons before deciding to curb the rise in young population or not.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, consequently, first, hence, however, if, may, regarding, so, still, therefore, in conclusion, such as, as a result, first of all, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 13.1623246493 137% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 51.0 41.998997996 121% => OK
Nominalization: 14.0 8.3376753507 168% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1746.0 1615.20841683 108% => OK
No of words: 335.0 315.596192385 106% => OK
Chars per words: 5.21194029851 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.27820116611 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.0259087657 2.80592935109 108% => OK
Unique words: 185.0 176.041082164 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.55223880597 0.561755894193 98% => OK
syllable_count: 544.5 506.74238477 107% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 9.0 4.76152304609 189% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 42.0256153286 49.4020404114 85% => OK
Chars per sentence: 109.125 106.682146367 102% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.9375 20.7667163134 101% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.5 7.06120827912 135% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.221290684675 0.244688304435 90% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0642886474253 0.084324248473 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0509173660305 0.0667982634062 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.117133711507 0.151304729494 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0397412581273 0.056905535591 70% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.6 13.0946893788 104% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 50.2224549098 102% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.94 12.4159519038 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.96 8.58950901804 104% => OK
difficult_words: 92.0 78.4519038076 117% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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