The diagram below shows the typical stages of consumer goods manufacturing, including the process by which information is fed back to earlier stages to enable adjustment.Write a report for a university lecturer describing the process shown

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The diagram below shows the typical stages of consumer goods manufacturing, including the process by which information is fed back to earlier stages to enable adjustment.

Write a report for a university lecturer describing the process shown

The flowchart illustrates, the different steps of consumer good production and the process of getting feed back to the starting stage for management.

Initially, the foremost steps of a goods production was storage which needs materials and resources. After collecting such substances do research about the product and present in assembly about the planned design. Pass through proper inspection and testing, product send to sealing section then despatch it and send for sales.

Regarding the result of consumer goods, firstly, collect information from the storage area the amount of collected things. secondly, the tested product send to design area if the changes offered in designs. finally, after delivering the product the information receive from sales department to production plan area and market research section as well. From there analyse the advertisement and packaging section send feed back immediately to design control

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 36, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'goods'' or 'good's'?
Suggestion: goods'; good's
... Initially, the foremost steps of a goods production was storage which needs mate...
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Line 3, column 311, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... to sealing section then despatch it and send for sales. Regarding the result ...
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Line 5, column 124, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Secondly
...ge area the amount of collected things. secondly, the tested product send to design area...
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Line 5, column 208, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Finally
...area if the changes offered in designs. finally, after delivering the product the infor...
^^^^^^^

Transition Words or Phrases used:
finally, first, firstly, if, regarding, second, secondly, so, then, well

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 1.0 7.0 14% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 6.8 103% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.15609756098 32% => OK
Pronoun: 1.0 5.60731707317 18% => OK
Preposition: 21.0 33.7804878049 62% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 3.97073170732 302% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 800.0 965.302439024 83% => OK
No of words: 141.0 196.424390244 72% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.67375886525 4.92477711251 115% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.44591672665 3.73543355544 92% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.73319384128 2.65546596893 103% => OK
Unique words: 87.0 106.607317073 82% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.617021276596 0.547539520022 113% => OK
syllable_count: 232.2 283.868780488 82% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.45097560976 110% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.33902439024 92% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 3.36585365854 119% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 8.94146341463 89% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 22.4926829268 76% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 20.7590341779 43.030603864 48% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 100.0 112.824112599 89% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.625 22.9334400587 77% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.0 5.23603664747 172% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 3.83414634146 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 4.0 1.69756097561 236% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 3.70975609756 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.09268292683 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.112131120283 0.215688989381 52% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0527773320513 0.103423049105 51% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.072670392982 0.0843802449381 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.107889425642 0.15604864568 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0919385556648 0.0819641961636 112% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.1 13.2329268293 107% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 61.2550243902 89% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 10.3012195122 96% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.31 11.4140731707 134% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.86 8.06136585366 122% => OK
difficult_words: 48.0 40.7170731707 118% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 11.4329268293 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.9970731707 80% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 11.0658536585 90% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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More content wanted.
Minimum 150 words wanted.

Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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