The diagram below shows the water cycle which is the continuous movement of water on above and below the surface of the Earth

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The diagram below shows the water cycle, which is the continuous movement of water on, above and below the surface of the Earth.

The diagram illustrates the process of water cycle in which water from the surface of Earth travels to air and back again to the land.

Overall, there are 3 main stages including the evaporation of water, cloud formation and the fall of water in the surface of Earth.

In the first stage, about 80% of water vapour in the air is from the ocean. Heat causes the condensing water vapour to form clouds. In the next stage, the process called ‘precipitation occurs in which the water falls in the form of rain or snow.

The final stage of the cycle is when the water takes various paths. Some water form lakes whereas some if it may travel to the ocean as groundwater. Otherwise, some water may also reach the impervious layer and then makes their way towards the sea. However, the process of salt water intrusion takes place before the water enters the ocean. Having completed all these steps, the cycle then begins again.

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Average: 7.5 (60 votes)
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, however, if, may, so, then, whereas

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 7.0 43% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 1.00243902439 200% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 6.8 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.15609756098 95% => OK
Pronoun: 3.0 5.60731707317 54% => OK
Preposition: 24.0 33.7804878049 71% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.97073170732 76% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 772.0 965.302439024 80% => OK
No of words: 164.0 196.424390244 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.70731707317 4.92477711251 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.57858190836 3.73543355544 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.37948674473 2.65546596893 90% => OK
Unique words: 92.0 106.607317073 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.560975609756 0.547539520022 102% => OK
syllable_count: 231.3 283.868780488 81% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 5.0 4.33902439024 115% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 3.36585365854 89% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 8.94146341463 112% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 22.4926829268 71% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 27.0769274476 43.030603864 63% => OK
Chars per sentence: 77.2 112.824112599 68% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.4 22.9334400587 72% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.8 5.23603664747 92% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 3.70975609756 27% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 9.0 4.09268292683 220% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.276987236461 0.215688989381 128% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.121997941847 0.103423049105 118% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.082433945306 0.0843802449381 98% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.207498138775 0.15604864568 133% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0639976421085 0.0819641961636 78% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.0 13.2329268293 68% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 72.16 61.2550243902 118% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 10.3012195122 70% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.74 11.4140731707 85% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.8 8.06136585366 97% => OK
difficult_words: 35.0 40.7170731707 86% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 11.4329268293 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.9970731707 76% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 11.0658536585 72% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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