The diagram belows show how geothermal energy is used to produce electricity. summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
The diagram illustrates the method of production of electricity from geothermal energy. It consist several steps.
Overall, it can be seen that there are many parts in this process of making electricity starting from cold water, like cold water container, 4.5 km long tube, hot rocks, condenser, turbine, generator and power house.
The process starts with the cold water in which cold water is accumulated in a container and then pumped down through a well known as injection well that is 4.5 km long. The temperature of cold water is raised by passing it through hot rocks which is known as geothermal zone.
In the next step, the hot water is pumped up by the production well . It transfer the hot water into the condenser in which water chnges to its vapour form or stream. Which is followed by the stream being strike on the turbine to rotate it. The turbine is connected with a generator, which move along with the turbine. Generator is then connected to a power house, which then transmits the electricity to the houses.
- The diagram belows show how geothermal energy is used to produce electricity summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant 56
- The diagrams below show the stages and equipment used in cement making process and how cement is used to produce concrete for building purposes Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant
- The diagrams below show the stages and equipment used in the cement making process and how cement is used to produce concrete for building purposes Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant 61
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Did you mean 'consists'?
Suggestion: consists
... electricity from geothermal energy. It consist several steps. Overall, it can be se...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... 4.5 km long tube, hot rocks, condenser, turbine, generator and power house. T...
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Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
...ater is pumped up by the production well . It transfer the hot water into the cond...
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Line 7, column 74, Rule ID: IT_VBZ[1]
Message: Did you mean 'transfers'?
Suggestion: transfers
...s pumped up by the production well . It transfer the hot water into the condenser in whi...
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Message: “Which” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...er chnges to its vapour form or stream. Which is followed by the stream being strike ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
then, well
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 7.0 157% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 6.8 44% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 8.0 3.15609756098 253% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 9.0 5.60731707317 161% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 28.0 33.7804878049 83% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.97073170732 76% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 858.0 965.302439024 89% => OK
No of words: 178.0 196.424390244 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.8202247191 4.92477711251 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.65262427087 3.73543355544 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.55835425472 2.65546596893 96% => OK
Unique words: 97.0 106.607317073 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.544943820225 0.547539520022 100% => OK
syllable_count: 254.7 283.868780488 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 1.53170731707 196% => OK
Article: 5.0 4.33902439024 115% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 3.36585365854 59% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 8.94146341463 112% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 22.4926829268 76% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 51.4765966241 43.030603864 120% => OK
Chars per sentence: 85.8 112.824112599 76% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.8 22.9334400587 78% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.0 5.23603664747 19% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 1.69756097561 295% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 3.70975609756 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.09268292683 122% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0503815568486 0.215688989381 23% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0254340995951 0.103423049105 25% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.042391948515 0.0843802449381 50% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0475315610581 0.15604864568 30% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0420573095114 0.0819641961636 51% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.2 13.2329268293 77% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 71.14 61.2550243902 116% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 10.3012195122 74% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.38 11.4140731707 91% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.5 8.06136585366 93% => OK
difficult_words: 34.0 40.7170731707 84% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 11.4329268293 96% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.9970731707 80% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.0658536585 99% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 11.2359550562 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 9
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