The diagram details the process of making leather products.
Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The diagram explains the way in which the animal leather products are made.
Overall, there are ten stages in the process, beginning with taking the animal skin to the dryer to be dried, culminating in reaching the final products to the shops to be used as bags and shoes.
First of all, the skin of the animal is dried and transported by trucks to the factory where it washed in a mixture of water and lime, then it is soaked in more lime for a period of time.
Following this, leather goes to a machine with big rollers to be flatted, after then it is soaked in a solution that is composed of water and tannin vegetable matter.
In the subsequent stage, it is polished by another rolling device and gets a bright look. Finally, the leather products such as bags and shoes are transported by trucks to reach the shops to be available for the customers.
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...he shops to be used as bags and shoes. First of all, the skin of the animal...
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...e, then it is soaked in more lime for a period of time. Following this, leather goes ...
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...ked in more lime for a period of time. Following this, leather goes to a m...
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... of water and tannin vegetable matter. In the subsequent stage, it is polis...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
finally, first, look, so, then, such as, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 7.0 171% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 6.8 88% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.15609756098 95% => OK
Pronoun: 6.0 5.60731707317 107% => OK
Preposition: 27.0 33.7804878049 80% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.97073170732 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 711.0 965.302439024 74% => OK
No of words: 157.0 196.424390244 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.52866242038 4.92477711251 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.53976893118 3.73543355544 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.3943792621 2.65546596893 90% => OK
Unique words: 85.0 106.607317073 80% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.541401273885 0.547539520022 99% => OK
syllable_count: 216.9 283.868780488 76% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.33902439024 69% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 3.36585365854 59% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 6.0 8.94146341463 67% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 26.0 22.4926829268 116% => OK
Sentence length SD: 46.1832100323 43.030603864 107% => OK
Chars per sentence: 118.5 112.824112599 105% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.1666666667 22.9334400587 114% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.83333333333 5.23603664747 169% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 3.83414634146 130% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 5.0 1.69756097561 295% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 3.70975609756 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.09268292683 49% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0989064853714 0.215688989381 46% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0534904126559 0.103423049105 52% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0467132184256 0.0843802449381 55% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0610426567865 0.15604864568 39% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0441265010041 0.0819641961636 54% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.0 13.2329268293 98% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 62.01 61.2550243902 101% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 10.3012195122 108% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.29 11.4140731707 81% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.74 8.06136585366 96% => OK
difficult_words: 28.0 40.7170731707 69% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 11.4329268293 114% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.9970731707 113% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 11.0658536585 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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