The diagram illustrates the process involved in steel rod manufacturing in the furniture industry.
Overall, there are eleven stages in the manufacturing process, which starts with collecting raw material and ends with inspecting.
First, raw material such as iron ore, yellow ore and carbon is collected and melted at the temperature of 1300-1500 Celsius degrees in the melting slit. Smelting cabin is where the third steps occur, the mixture experience a refinement in order to make it pour. Once the third step finally finishes, the pouring machine pour candescent metal into ingots. Next, in the cooling reservoir which is connected to ingots, metal is cooled down at the temperature of sixty to one hundred degree Celsius and metal goes through nozzels and become strands of cooled metal. Following this, strands of cooled metal are rolled in rollers and experience a heat treatment in a heating machine. In the eighth step, the strands’ surfaces are checked by a measuring automaton. After that, the products are sized by the cutter and get ID stamping. In the final step , the products undergo an inspection and then they are ready for use.
- The diagram illustrates how steel rods are manufactured in the furniture industry Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant 78
- The chart below shows the numbers of male and female research students studying six science related subjects at a UK university in 2009 Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparison where relevant 59
- Around the world it is likely that more adults will work from home and more children will study from home as computer technology becomes cheaper and more accessible Do you think it is a negative or a positive development 61
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 845, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...r and get ID stamping. In the final step , the products undergo an inspection and ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
finally, first, then, third, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 7.0 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 6.8 118% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.15609756098 127% => OK
Pronoun: 4.0 5.60731707317 71% => OK
Preposition: 27.0 33.7804878049 80% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.97073170732 126% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 965.0 965.302439024 100% => OK
No of words: 188.0 196.424390244 96% => OK
Chars per words: 5.1329787234 4.92477711251 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.70287850203 3.73543355544 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.67554371961 2.65546596893 101% => OK
Unique words: 122.0 106.607317073 114% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.648936170213 0.547539520022 119% => OK
syllable_count: 293.4 283.868780488 103% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.45097560976 110% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 6.0 4.33902439024 138% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 3.36585365854 119% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 8.94146341463 112% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 22.4926829268 80% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 38.4494473302 43.030603864 89% => OK
Chars per sentence: 96.5 112.824112599 86% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.8 22.9334400587 82% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.6 5.23603664747 69% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 3.83414634146 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 3.70975609756 27% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 9.0 4.09268292683 220% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0825975428221 0.215688989381 38% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.042348160259 0.103423049105 41% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0949238868058 0.0843802449381 112% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.122535431857 0.15604864568 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.138864473223 0.0819641961636 169% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.1 13.2329268293 91% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 61.2550243902 87% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 10.3012195122 100% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.47 11.4140731707 109% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.98 8.06136585366 111% => OK
difficult_words: 53.0 40.7170731707 130% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 11.4329268293 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.9970731707 84% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 11.0658536585 90% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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