Nowadays, since technological devices become less expensive and more approachable, working and studying from home become more and more common. From my point of view, this development brings various benefits and drawbacks to our life.
Working and studying from home brings various benefits. First, it helps create an comfortable working and studying enviroment.
Since people often feel free at home, staying home will make people feel comfortable and relaxed. This results in always being in energetic condition and a huge amount of stressed can be avoided. Moreover, people who work and study at home do not have to travel to their workplace or their school which means a huge amount of time and money spending on traveling can be saved. To add to that, less traveling also helps reduce less exhauste fume, this help the environment become less polluted.
On the other hand, work and study remotely from home have numerous drawbacks. Work office and school is where people can create and enhance most of their social relationship. Without going to these places, it is hard for collageus and students to form a relationship with each others. As a result, people who work remotely will be lack of social relationship and communication skills. Another noticeable downside of this working or studying method is the risk of productivity reducing. Both adults and students are easily attracted by social network like Facebook, Instagram,... and other leisure activities that are offered on the Internet. Without being observed while using the Internet, people can be tempted by recreationial activities above and work or study uneffectively.
To sum up, in my opinion, despite offering various benefits, working and studying from home still have various noticable drawbacks that need to be tackled.
- The chart below shows the numbers of male and female research students studying six science related subjects at a UK university in 2009 Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparison where relevant 59
- The diagram illustrates how steel rods are manufactured in the furniture industry Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant 78
- Around the world it is likely that more adults will work from home and more children will study from home as computer technology becomes cheaper and more accessible Do you think it is a negative or a positive development 61
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, if, moreover, so, still, while, as a result, in my opinion, to sum up, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 22.0 10.4138276553 211% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1513.0 1615.20841683 94% => OK
No of words: 286.0 315.596192385 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.29020979021 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.11236361783 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.76044245455 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 159.0 176.041082164 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.555944055944 0.561755894193 99% => OK
syllable_count: 466.2 506.74238477 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 10.0 4.76152304609 210% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 32.2583644366 49.4020404114 65% => OK
Chars per sentence: 89.0 106.682146367 83% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.8235294118 20.7667163134 81% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.94117647059 7.06120827912 84% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.283950224827 0.244688304435 116% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0918149422628 0.084324248473 109% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.103607807781 0.0667982634062 155% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.181463732566 0.151304729494 120% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.102166384092 0.056905535591 180% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.9 13.0946893788 91% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 55.24 50.2224549098 110% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.11 12.4159519038 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.52 8.58950901804 99% => OK
difficult_words: 74.0 78.4519038076 94% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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