Maps elucidates the changes that occurred at Queen Mary hospital from 1960 to 2000 in step-by -step manner.
Overall, it is clear that the area underwent enormous development in the span of forty years. Shopping center and farmland are removed .In spite of them, medical shop along with tumor block are introduced.
Initially In 1960, Whole area is divided in four equal parts. Shopping center and Hospital are towards road . While, Farmland and car park are behind them respectively. By 1980, Agricultural area is converted into a nursing school. In addition, Shopping area is divided into two equal parts pharmacy and cancer institute. Along with this, pharmacy building is attached to the hospital and the tumor block is separated. Finally in 2000, Car parking zone is reduced by half and the other half is replaced by nursing school. However, old nursing school area is completely modified into a cancer block giving it an "L" shaped appearance .Nevertheless, Hospital, Pharmacy and main road remained unchanged.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
finally, however, if, nevertheless, while, in addition, in spite of
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 7.0 186% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 6.8 103% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.15609756098 63% => OK
Pronoun: 7.0 5.60731707317 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 22.0 33.7804878049 65% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.97073170732 76% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 878.0 965.302439024 91% => OK
No of words: 164.0 196.424390244 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.35365853659 4.92477711251 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.57858190836 3.73543355544 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.7030574805 2.65546596893 102% => OK
Unique words: 103.0 106.607317073 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.628048780488 0.547539520022 115% => OK
syllable_count: 264.6 283.868780488 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.45097560976 110% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 0.0 4.33902439024 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 3.36585365854 119% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 8.94146341463 123% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 22.4926829268 62% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 36.8295156517 43.030603864 86% => OK
Chars per sentence: 79.8181818182 112.824112599 71% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.9090909091 22.9334400587 65% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.09090909091 5.23603664747 116% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 3.83414634146 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 11.0 1.69756097561 648% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 3.70975609756 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 1.13902439024 351% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.09268292683 122% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.089852052393 0.215688989381 42% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0360638935206 0.103423049105 35% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.069160410496 0.0843802449381 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.092311516432 0.15604864568 59% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.107102308875 0.0819641961636 131% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.2 13.2329268293 85% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 57.27 61.2550243902 93% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.8 10.3012195122 85% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.16 11.4140731707 115% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.05 8.06136585366 112% => OK
difficult_words: 49.0 40.7170731707 120% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 11.4329268293 52% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 7.6 10.9970731707 69% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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