In the modern world, The ultimate target of any student is to settle in a good position. Youngsters have the capability to think about themselves. Moreover, Parents and Teachers also strive for the well being of their children. I Think both views are equally important for the career of the student.
First and foremost, Youngsters these days are matured enough to decide what is right and wrong. In addition, It is ultimately themselves who should face all positives and negatives associated with that particular studies. If parents are forcing the students to join in particular course with out the children's fascination towards the subject, they it may sometimes leads to devasting situations like failure of the student in the studies. Hence, children's are important to decide a course or job for them.
On the other hand, Parents, guardians and teachers will always think about the growth of the children. So, they give good quality decisions based on their veteran experiences. In addition, Youngsters sometimes may not know able to take efficient decisions because they get attracted to temporary achievements.Therefore, career selected by them will be a " perfectly suitable" to their off springs
From my notion, Both sides have equal significance. Undeniably, Children have the capability to decide about their future and Parents always think best for their children . Therefore, It is advised for youngsters to take ideas from their parents while deciding there education or job.
To recapitulate, Deciding the future of youngsters has became a herculean task in recent days. Hence parents and youngsters should together take part for the career of their children
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, hence, if, may, moreover, so, therefore, well, while, in addition, in particular, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 7.30460921844 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1432.0 1615.20841683 89% => OK
No of words: 266.0 315.596192385 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.38345864662 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.03850299372 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.97783665044 2.80592935109 106% => OK
Unique words: 150.0 176.041082164 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.563909774436 0.561755894193 100% => OK
syllable_count: 433.8 506.74238477 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 63.2017580627 49.4020404114 128% => OK
Chars per sentence: 95.4666666667 106.682146367 89% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.7333333333 20.7667163134 85% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.46666666667 7.06120827912 106% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 16.0 5.01903807615 319% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.213157588433 0.244688304435 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0773820313874 0.084324248473 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0588490475925 0.0667982634062 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.133620841487 0.151304729494 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0619250925593 0.056905535591 109% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.8 13.0946893788 98% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 50.2224549098 108% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.63 12.4159519038 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.4 8.58950901804 98% => OK
difficult_words: 66.0 78.4519038076 84% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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