The diagram illustrates the process that is used to manufacture bricks for the building industry.
The diagram depicts the cycle of producing bricks for building usage.
The 7-step cycle starts with clay being collected by a groove and ends with packed bricks that will be delivered to clients. This is achieved by multiple processing operations that converts clay soil into usable bricks.
The process starts with clay soil being picked by digger, after that the clay will be netted by a special net to use only designated part of it, the step after this involves adding sand and water to the usable molecules of clay to be processed placing it into a special templates and then cut it into pieces or another template to produce two different types of bricks.
In forth step, the bricks will be add into a particular oven for 1 to 2 days to be dried, next stage include placed the resulted items into moderate and high temperature kiln, before cooling the bricks using a specific rooms for 2 to 3 days, the step after that is assemble those bricks to make packaged that will be shipped to the customers at final stage.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 4, column 266, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'assembled'.
Suggestion: assembled
...for 2 to 3 days, the step after that is assemble those bricks to make packaged that will...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, so, then
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 7.0 143% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 1.00243902439 399% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 5.0 6.8 74% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.15609756098 158% => OK
Pronoun: 11.0 5.60731707317 196% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 32.0 33.7804878049 95% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 3.97073170732 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 844.0 965.302439024 87% => OK
No of words: 182.0 196.424390244 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.63736263736 4.92477711251 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.67297393991 3.73543355544 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.32037332151 2.65546596893 87% => OK
Unique words: 107.0 106.607317073 100% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.587912087912 0.547539520022 107% => OK
syllable_count: 255.6 283.868780488 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 6.0 4.33902439024 138% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 3.36585365854 89% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 5.0 8.94146341463 56% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 36.0 22.4926829268 160% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 132.173522311 43.030603864 307% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 168.8 112.824112599 150% => OK
Words per sentence: 36.4 22.9334400587 159% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.4 5.23603664747 46% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 3.70975609756 27% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.09268292683 98% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.180299098431 0.215688989381 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.122130302055 0.103423049105 118% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.100997510968 0.0843802449381 120% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.145254584913 0.15604864568 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.100958290005 0.0819641961636 123% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 18.6 13.2329268293 141% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.86 61.2550243902 85% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.0 10.3012195122 146% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.22 11.4140731707 90% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.33 8.06136585366 116% => OK
difficult_words: 45.0 40.7170731707 111% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 11.4329268293 118% => OK
gunning_fog: 16.4 10.9970731707 149% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 11.0658536585 90% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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