Public libraries should provide books and not waste their limited resources on expensive high-tech media such as software, videos or Dvds. Do you agree or disagree?
The library was considered a shelter for brains in past decades. You could not make any research without visiting the library at least 9 times and reading thousands of books, just to start writing, on the other hand, when technology went viral, it makes everything Just a push of a button away, although it’s extremely comfortable physically, it’s exhausting mentally.
In the past, there were a lot of libraries, at least in every government there is one, hundreds of readers go every day to borrow books and read in silence, Books open a window to imagining, creating, and thinking, in every small detail in the world, would Einstein observe the movement of the apple down if his phone is ring? don’t think so, he just looked, observed, traced, and a lot of reading to came up with his theories which turned the world upside down.
Eventually, there are a lot of ways to know the pieces of information on any topic with any reference, a lot of sources, easy to reach as quickly as the blink of an eye, furthermore, there is a value for books, for each paper, even for font and the size of writing, books considered as entertain, entertains brien and make it off for a while, far away from the boisterous of the world, undeniably, books takes you in a different world without any complications or impediments.
Therefore, spending money on expensive high-tech media materials, like; software, computers, videos, or DVDs, is a waste of money, with already confined resources, although it is Erasable easily, without any effect or impact in mind.in addition, there is a meaning to reading, every turning page, not everyone can realize this meaning, only how can see the value of books.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, furthermore, if, look, so, therefore, while, at least, in addition, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 7.30460921844 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 11.0 24.0651302605 46% => OK
Preposition: 48.0 41.998997996 114% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1418.0 1615.20841683 88% => OK
No of words: 290.0 315.596192385 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.88965517241 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.12666770723 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.70674499905 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 177.0 176.041082164 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.610344827586 0.561755894193 109% => OK
syllable_count: 435.6 506.74238477 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 6.0 16.0721442886 37% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 48.0 20.2975951904 236% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 139.572860304 49.4020404114 283% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 236.333333333 106.682146367 222% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 48.3333333333 20.7667163134 233% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 15.0 7.06120827912 212% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0942998891601 0.244688304435 39% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0425527848525 0.084324248473 50% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0313268183166 0.0667982634062 47% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0549124206233 0.151304729494 36% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0303241265719 0.056905535591 53% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 25.8 13.0946893788 197% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 31.22 50.2224549098 62% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 20.8 11.3001002004 184% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.97 12.4159519038 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.99 8.58950901804 116% => OK
difficult_words: 73.0 78.4519038076 93% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 19.0 9.78957915832 194% => OK
gunning_fog: 21.2 10.1190380762 210% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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