Some people say that the increasing use of modern technology has made work a lot easier and quicker to accomplish. Others, however, argue that it has only made people busier.
Is the technology contribute to an increase ot decrease in our daily lives?
Without technology people feel like something in their lives is missing .
It's a good conception to use technology in people's life because it is affect on humans in any field like work or their university .
This essay will discuss how use technology in lifestyle and there are two opinions of increase and decrease technology in working so will talk about the two .
In researchs indicate that the first opinion that technology has made work alot easier let talk about that .
Almost sure technology can effect on anything in people's life like work and university . The work is now faster and easier because of technology made people arrive for each other easily , the workers can reach to their supervisor by calling him or her in alot after apps like Facebook or Instagram or sending emails between them and others. For example after Corona Virus appeared , the technology increased more than in the past .
According to the another opinion that technology made people busier .
As the past paragraph talk about that technology affects on people so when people use alot of technology and ignore anything
So it will affect on human's works and make people less working also make students very slow in their university and responsibilities. For example people can make alot of things far from technology like go to clubs , hanging out with friends , means that people deal with them face to face to can communicate with us easily.
To conclude It is very important essay to know the importance of technology and how affect on increase and decrease the work or the lifestyle for humans .
In my opinion, it is very important to use technology that means technology increase alot of things in our lives because it makes me communicate with anyone even if he lives abroad also , it makes me follow up the job if I search for an opportunity to work also , I can call my friends on video call by messenger or any app . In addition to technology provides the place and date of making meetings.
According to my opinion about that technology make people busier , actually it makes people are busier because they use technology in text with friends and waste time for unused things not use it in useful ways.
Technology is a useful servant but must to be managed .
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, also, but, first, if, so, for example, in addition, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 19.0 10.4138276553 182% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 38.0 24.0651302605 158% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 67.0 41.998997996 160% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1934.0 1615.20841683 120% => OK
No of words: 399.0 315.596192385 126% => OK
Chars per words: 4.84711779449 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.46933824581 4.20363070211 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.610483955 2.80592935109 93% => OK
Unique words: 176.0 176.041082164 100% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.441102756892 0.561755894193 79% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 639.0 506.74238477 126% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 79.1159898108 49.4020404114 160% => OK
Chars per sentence: 120.875 106.682146367 113% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.9375 20.7667163134 120% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.6875 7.06120827912 66% => OK
Paragraphs: 13.0 4.38176352705 297% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 23.0 5.01903807615 458% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 8.67935871743 150% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.313168122667 0.244688304435 128% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.132789085334 0.084324248473 157% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0681174351071 0.0667982634062 102% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.150896586421 0.151304729494 100% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0679991467874 0.056905535591 119% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.9 13.0946893788 106% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 47.12 50.2224549098 94% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.15 12.4159519038 90% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.32 8.58950901804 85% => OK
difficult_words: 63.0 78.4519038076 80% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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