The diagram provides information about the production of chocolate while a breakdown of the chocolate pricing proportion is presented in the bar graph.
The diagram provides information about the production of chocolate while a breakdown of the chocolate pricing proportion is presented in the bar graph.
The raw cocoa is initially ground with a grinding machine to perfectly separate between the shell and fruit, then the shell as a by-product of these process is stored while the fruit is sent to the a heated chamber to be liquified. This is where the process diverges into two. From the chamber, the liquid cocoa is pressed to produce two products such as the cocoa powder and butter. Once this powder is ready, then it is delivered to a food industry, and the cocoa butter added sugar with and other ingredients is directly transferred to a chocolate industry to make bar of chocolate.
When it comes to the price of chocolate bar, the cost production makes up just under two-fifths, and this is by far the highest percentage of the chocolate pricing factors. The second proportion affecting chocolate prices places supermarket to distribute those bars in the market with just above a third. Tax comes third and contributed to 15% while chocolate companies relatively earn one in ten. Finally, farmers only gain a very small percentage (4%) compared to other factors.
Overall, the chocolate production consists of some stages, and the most affecting factor of the price of chocolate is the cost production while the lowest contribution of chocolate price is revenue to be given to farmers.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 195, Rule ID: DT_DT[1]
Message: Maybe you need to remove one determiner so that only 'the' or 'a' is left.
Suggestion: the; a
...ss is stored while the fruit is sent to the a heated chamber to be liquified. This is...
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Line 7, column 138, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...rice of chocolate is the cost production while the lowest contribution of chocola...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, finally, if, second, so, then, third, while, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 7.0 200% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 6.8 103% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.15609756098 63% => OK
Pronoun: 7.0 5.60731707317 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 38.0 33.7804878049 112% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 3.97073170732 201% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1212.0 965.302439024 126% => OK
No of words: 241.0 196.424390244 123% => OK
Chars per words: 5.02904564315 4.92477711251 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.94007293032 3.73543355544 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.76822267268 2.65546596893 104% => OK
Unique words: 129.0 106.607317073 121% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.535269709544 0.547539520022 98% => OK
syllable_count: 382.5 283.868780488 135% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.45097560976 110% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 6.0 4.33902439024 138% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.482926829268 621% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 3.36585365854 30% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 8.94146341463 112% => OK
Sentence length: 24.0 22.4926829268 107% => OK
Sentence length SD: 60.1148900024 43.030603864 140% => OK
Chars per sentence: 121.2 112.824112599 107% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.1 22.9334400587 105% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.7 5.23603664747 109% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 1.69756097561 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 3.70975609756 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.09268292683 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.5084622905 0.215688989381 236% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.208582566518 0.103423049105 202% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.284070381447 0.0843802449381 337% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.424292883133 0.15604864568 272% => Maybe some contents are duplicated.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.344347854554 0.0819641961636 420% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.3 13.2329268293 108% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 47.12 61.2550243902 77% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 10.3012195122 123% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.19 11.4140731707 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.63 8.06136585366 107% => OK
difficult_words: 58.0 40.7170731707 142% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 11.4329268293 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.9970731707 105% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 11.0658536585 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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