The diagram show the stages and equipments used in the process of cement making and how is used to produce the concrete for building purposes.

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The diagram show the stages and equipments used in the process of cement making and how is used to produce the concrete for building purposes.

The provided flow diagrams reveal the information about the process of cement and concrete manufacturing by some necessary material and instruments.

Overall, it is evident that, the steps of making cement are more complicated, and require advanced machinery, while the concrete production utilize mixing of four components in the proportions, in simple machine.

It can be seen that, the production procedure of cement consists of four main stages: crushing, mixing, rotating, and grinding. At the first step, not only crush limestone, but also crush clay together to make powder. Nextly, the powder can then be mixed properly, in the mixer. It is then passed through the narrow rotating tube. Heat is introduced from the end of the tube before the blend is actually dropped on the grinder. After that, cement is made, and packed in the bags.

The manufacturing of concrete, four components are required, that are cement (50%), water (10%), sand (25%), and gravel (50%). After that, they put together into the concrete mixer, which rotate in the clock-wuse position in order to mix the given material.

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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, also, but, first, so, then, while

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 7.0 143% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 1.00243902439 200% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 6.8 103% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 3.15609756098 190% => OK
Pronoun: 9.0 5.60731707317 161% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 27.0 33.7804878049 80% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.97073170732 101% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 926.0 965.302439024 96% => OK
No of words: 178.0 196.424390244 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.20224719101 4.92477711251 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.65262427087 3.73543355544 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.67611579684 2.65546596893 101% => OK
Unique words: 114.0 106.607317073 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.640449438202 0.547539520022 117% => OK
syllable_count: 279.9 283.868780488 99% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.45097560976 110% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 1.53170731707 326% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 5.0 4.33902439024 115% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.07073170732 280% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 5.0 0.482926829268 1035% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 3.36585365854 149% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 8.94146341463 112% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 22.4926829268 76% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 47.6105030429 43.030603864 111% => OK
Chars per sentence: 92.6 112.824112599 82% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.8 22.9334400587 78% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.3 5.23603664747 82% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 3.70975609756 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.13902439024 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.09268292683 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.117405004257 0.215688989381 54% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0421021573869 0.103423049105 41% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.044311473019 0.0843802449381 53% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0821350296022 0.15604864568 53% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0431055228055 0.0819641961636 53% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.0 13.2329268293 91% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 61.2550243902 89% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 10.3012195122 96% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.58 11.4140731707 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.0 8.06136585366 112% => OK
difficult_words: 51.0 40.7170731707 125% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 11.4329268293 96% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.9970731707 80% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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