A century's future depends on its young people . Therefore, it is often argued that government should invest heavily on its youth. Do you agree or disagree?
It is undoubtedly true that the development of nation rely totally on youngsters. It is debatable issue that the authorities should spend a lot of money for the improvement of various kinds of skills among people. One of the main topic which asserts that the government; should invest on youth or not ? Through this essay , I shall explore the dimensions of the topic through examples and shape up my opinion by the end.
On one side, there are group of people who believe that regularities should invest for the welfare of youth, reason being, they are future of the nation. Moreover, it has been contemplated that the essential factor for the development is proper education, through which they can boost their skills associated with work , and they will become more productive. Ultimately, the overall economic growth of country will enhance and
become more developed. So, it is the prime duty of ruler bodies to invest a finance on youngsters. To exemplify, I would like to bolster my prospective by saying that the province like America is providing free education to the teenagers, so that is is developed nation.
Moving further, they also strengthen their view point, by claiming that youth have sharp memory and are capable to grasp extreme knowledge as ita own. Because, they are physically and mentally more healthy. Moreover, if proper educational facilities would be provided by the authorities, then they can prove themselves as multifaceted by getting tech-how knowledge. In this way, economy will become more prosper. For instance, nations who invest 10 percentage of the total funds on teenagers, they have more educated and skilled workers, ad described in the survey conducted by the Hindustan times.
In my prospective, there is no single conclusion. So, I put it into nutshell that government should invest on proper education of youth to improve their skills , which helps to raise the economic growth of nation.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, moreover, so, then, for instance
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 14.0 7.30460921844 192% => OK
Pronoun: 33.0 24.0651302605 137% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 45.0 41.998997996 107% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1624.0 1615.20841683 101% => OK
No of words: 318.0 315.596192385 101% => OK
Chars per words: 5.10691823899 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.22286093782 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.77746029932 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 181.0 176.041082164 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.569182389937 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 503.1 506.74238477 99% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 5.43587174349 202% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 49.6528180847 49.4020404114 101% => OK
Chars per sentence: 101.5 106.682146367 95% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.875 20.7667163134 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.625 7.06120827912 37% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 3.4128256513 205% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0890723827947 0.244688304435 36% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0312910954526 0.084324248473 37% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.048448017998 0.0667982634062 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0561626274771 0.151304729494 37% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0302810172526 0.056905535591 53% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.6 13.0946893788 96% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 50.2224549098 104% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.36 12.4159519038 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.65 8.58950901804 101% => OK
difficult_words: 82.0 78.4519038076 105% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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