the diagram shows how an office building looks at the present and the plan for its further development.
As we can see, the current and proposed layout of an office building are illustrated in this map, which is expected to experience huge changes.
Before modification, there are two grasslands located at the West and the East of this building with a bathroom and a reception near the East and one on the south were staff can enter through. It is also clear that four office rooms are dotted at the south of this building, with one adjacent to each other. At the North, can be found right opposite those office rooms.
In the future, enormous differences will take place in this building. Firstly, as one will be converted into an outside activity ares, while the other will be modified into a coffee bar at the North and a meeting are at the South. The reception and entrance are also intended to be relocated to the mid of two office rooms at the South facing the other two officers rooms and a stock room at the North. This means that the original kitchen and canteen will have been removed.
- The diagram below shows how fruit is canned. 11
- the charts showe the percentage of male and female students getting top graded in 1960 and 2000. 67
- the table describes the changes in people who went for international travel in 1990, 1995, 2000 and 2005. 61
- the diagram shows how an office building looks at the present and the plan for its further development 63
- The chart below shows the rate of males and females who were overweight in Austalia from 1980 to 2010 Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make a comparison where relevant 64
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, if, so, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 7.0 186% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 1.00243902439 698% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 8.0 6.8 118% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.15609756098 95% => OK
Pronoun: 10.0 5.60731707317 178% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 28.0 33.7804878049 83% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.97073170732 126% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 814.0 965.302439024 84% => OK
No of words: 180.0 196.424390244 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.52222222222 4.92477711251 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.66284150148 3.73543355544 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.35112266328 2.65546596893 89% => OK
Unique words: 101.0 106.607317073 95% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.561111111111 0.547539520022 102% => OK
syllable_count: 256.5 283.868780488 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.33902439024 46% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 1.07073170732 374% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 3.36585365854 119% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 8.94146341463 89% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 22.4926829268 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 47.7957895635 43.030603864 111% => OK
Chars per sentence: 101.75 112.824112599 90% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.5 22.9334400587 98% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.375 5.23603664747 84% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 3.83414634146 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 3.70975609756 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.09268292683 122% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.144718438493 0.215688989381 67% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0648649624035 0.103423049105 63% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0404042742682 0.0843802449381 48% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.106517296044 0.15604864568 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0047764904983 0.0819641961636 6% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.1 13.2329268293 84% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 66.07 61.2550243902 108% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 10.3012195122 92% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.23 11.4140731707 81% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.53 8.06136585366 93% => OK
difficult_words: 32.0 40.7170731707 79% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 11.4329268293 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.9970731707 98% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.0658536585 99% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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