The diagram shows the life cycle of the silkworm and stages in the production of the silk cloth
The given diagram shows the information about four stages of silkworm life cycle, and process of cloth making from cocoon by follow different stages.
Firstly, silkworm produced a eggs than, after ten days made a larva and took a mulberry leafs as a feed. As well as, during a 4-6 weeks silk thread came on his body. Moreover, it properly covered with thread, and became a cocoon in3- 8 days. At the last, stage after a 16 days it had become a adult moth.
In the other hand for produce silk cloth. Cocoon boiled in water on high temperature also. Secondly, stayed it unwind lying and took a 300-900 meter thread cotton from one cocoon. After that it cleared the stage of twisting. Either made a waves after twist or could twist after waves. At the end used colours to dye thread.
Overall, it is evident that here a main component is cocoon to make a silk cloth. Cocoon also make from after complete a particular process.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 28, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
... stages. Firstly, silkworm produced a eggs than, after ten days made a larva ...
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Line 3, column 28, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[1]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'a egg' or simply 'eggs'?
Suggestion: a egg; eggs
... stages. Firstly, silkworm produced a eggs than, after ten days made a larva and t...
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Line 3, column 77, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...an, after ten days made a larva and took a mulberry leafs as a feed. As well as, ...
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Line 3, column 293, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
...st, stage after a 16 days it had become a adult moth. In the other hand for p...
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Line 5, column 86, Rule ID: ALSO_SENT_END[1]
Message: 'Also' is not used at the end of the sentence. Use 'as well' instead.
Suggestion: as well
...oon boiled in water on high temperature also. Secondly, stayed it unwind lying and t...
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Line 5, column 112, Rule ID: IT_VBZ[1]
Message: Did you mean 'unwinds'?
Suggestion: unwinds
...h temperature also. Secondly, stayed it unwind lying and took a 300-900 meter thread c...
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Line 5, column 181, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “After” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...00 meter thread cotton from one cocoon. After that it cleared the stage of twisting. ...
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Line 5, column 238, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[1]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'a wave' or simply 'waves'?
Suggestion: a wave; waves
...ared the stage of twisting. Either made a waves after twist or could twist after waves....
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, well, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 2.0 7.0 29% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 6.8 74% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.15609756098 63% => OK
Pronoun: 8.0 5.60731707317 143% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 24.0 33.7804878049 71% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.97073170732 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 765.0 965.302439024 79% => OK
No of words: 167.0 196.424390244 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.58083832335 4.92477711251 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.59483629437 3.73543355544 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.22093540058 2.65546596893 84% => OK
Unique words: 112.0 106.607317073 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.670658682635 0.547539520022 122% => OK
syllable_count: 229.5 283.868780488 81% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 1.0 4.33902439024 23% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.07073170732 280% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.482926829268 414% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 3.36585365854 178% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 8.94146341463 145% => OK
Sentence length: 12.0 22.4926829268 53% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 29.5994962375 43.030603864 69% => OK
Chars per sentence: 58.8461538462 112.824112599 52% => More chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 12.8461538462 22.9334400587 56% => More words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 5.69230769231 5.23603664747 109% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 1.69756097561 471% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 3.70975609756 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 9.0 4.09268292683 220% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.201028680346 0.215688989381 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0662040031643 0.103423049105 64% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0893015652114 0.0843802449381 106% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.13874025631 0.15604864568 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.103974117856 0.0819641961636 127% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 6.6 13.2329268293 50% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 76.22 61.2550243902 124% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 5.6 10.3012195122 54% => Flesch kincaid grade is low.
coleman_liau_index: 8.4 11.4140731707 74% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.82 8.06136585366 97% => OK
difficult_words: 38.0 40.7170731707 93% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 11.4329268293 57% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 6.8 10.9970731707 62% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 11.0658536585 63% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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