Some people believe that movies should be based on social stigmass while it should be based on real life heros.
With the growth of modernisation, a man has transformed his life tremendously. He has progressed from walking bare footed in jungles to take first step on the moon. Nevertheless, there are some issues which remain irrevocable and as complex as ever. For instance, the given topic asserts that which movies should based on; social stigmass and real life hero? Through this essay i shall explore the dimensions as well as my opinion at the end.
The first step of this essay relates to social stigmass. Some people are favour in social stigmass. It also relates to social issues. Cultural issues like gender identity. In India, there are a number of rules but people do not fulfill any rules. Moreover, women works according to the instruction of male. Women have a ability but she does not work according to their will. The best example is the Indian movie "Dangal" in this movie a Geeta phogat named lady won many prizes in wrestling.
Contrary to this., there are some people who believe that movies should be based on real life heros. It also helps to inspire the people. Further more, some movies are related to our history whenever people see these movies they may get extra knowledge about culture and its also useful to choose right direction. A good illustration is this the punjabi movie, "Baag milkha baag" shows the original sacrifices of person.
Overall, it is evident that movies should be based on both types of movies ;social Stigmass and real life heros. Both are play great role to motivate the people.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, may, moreover, nevertheless, so, well, for instance, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 41.998997996 74% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1282.0 1615.20841683 79% => OK
No of words: 261.0 315.596192385 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.91187739464 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0193898071 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.55946727109 2.80592935109 91% => OK
Unique words: 160.0 176.041082164 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.613026819923 0.561755894193 109% => OK
syllable_count: 407.7 506.74238477 80% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 16.0721442886 118% => OK
Sentence length: 13.0 20.2975951904 64% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 35.7563314038 49.4020404114 72% => OK
Chars per sentence: 67.4736842105 106.682146367 63% => OK
Words per sentence: 13.7368421053 20.7667163134 66% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.47368421053 7.06120827912 63% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 8.67935871743 150% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.429499322294 0.244688304435 176% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.117584894034 0.084324248473 139% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.192091475935 0.0667982634062 288% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.266870634403 0.151304729494 176% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.111651700621 0.056905535591 196% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.6 13.0946893788 66% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 58.28 50.2224549098 116% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 11.3001002004 74% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.61 12.4159519038 85% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.58 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 71.0 78.4519038076 91% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 5.5 9.78957915832 56% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 7.2 10.1190380762 71% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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