The diagram shows the life cycle of the silkworm and stages in the production of the silk cloth.

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The diagram shows the life cycle of the silkworm and stages in the production of the silk cloth.

The given diagram highlights the information about the stages in the life cycle of the silkworm and the process of producing silk cloth. It is a clear and coherent representation.

At the first stage, there is a moth who lay the eggs. Then, the eggs are hatching after 10 days and the silkworm larva come out. After that, they eat the food which is mulberry leaf. Furthermore, after four to six weeks the larva become covered in the silk thread and it takes between three to eight days for full cocoon to be produced.

Nextly, the cocoon is selecting and then it is boiled into the water. After boiling, the thread that makes up the cocoon is unwounded and the silk thread is twisting. Then, the thread is either be dyed directly or it is firstly weave then dyed subsequently.

Overall, it is evident that, the life cycle of silkworm has four stages but the production of silk cloth hax six stages.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 229, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[2]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'woven'.
Suggestion: woven
...ither be dyed directly or it is firstly weave then dyed subsequently. Overall, it ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, furthermore, if, then

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 7.0 186% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 6.8 118% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.15609756098 158% => OK
Pronoun: 9.0 5.60731707317 161% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 19.0 33.7804878049 56% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 3.0 3.97073170732 76% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 746.0 965.302439024 77% => OK
No of words: 162.0 196.424390244 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.6049382716 4.92477711251 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.56762134501 3.73543355544 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.41439315665 2.65546596893 91% => OK
Unique words: 92.0 106.607317073 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.567901234568 0.547539520022 104% => OK
syllable_count: 215.1 283.868780488 76% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.45097560976 90% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 1.53170731707 196% => OK
Article: 6.0 4.33902439024 138% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.07073170732 280% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 3.36585365854 119% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 8.94146341463 112% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 22.4926829268 71% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 35.6936969226 43.030603864 83% => OK
Chars per sentence: 74.6 112.824112599 66% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.2 22.9334400587 71% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.2 5.23603664747 80% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 3.70975609756 27% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 9.0 4.09268292683 220% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.313502608578 0.215688989381 145% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.116552184946 0.103423049105 113% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.181195329997 0.0843802449381 215% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.247623762347 0.15604864568 159% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.197854873141 0.0819641961636 241% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.3 13.2329268293 63% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 80.62 61.2550243902 132% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.0 10.3012195122 58% => Flesch kincaid grade is low.
coleman_liau_index: 9.1 11.4140731707 80% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.65 8.06136585366 95% => OK
difficult_words: 33.0 40.7170731707 81% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 11.4329268293 57% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.9970731707 76% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 11.0658536585 72% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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