The diagram shows the process of either recycling plastic items to produce goods or trash into dust bins to fill land

Essay topics:

The diagram shows the process of either recycling plastic items to produce goods, or trash into dust bins to fill land.

The diagram describes the two methods of dealing with plastic waste, either dumping them in landfill sites or recycling them.

Overall, it can be seen that the recycling process is more complex than the process of dumping the waster in landfill sites.

The plastic waste that is not intended to be recycled, will go through 3 phases. First, the customers buy the plastic products from the shops and use them. Next, after using the products, the customers put them into waste bins or litter them on the ground. The plastic waste is then collected and dumped into a landfill site.

The recycling process consists of 6 stages. It begins with the plastic products being bought and used. They are then brought to recycling collecting points. After sorting them out in the warehouses, they are loaded on trucks to be transported to the processing facilities. At these facilities, they are made into new products. The recycling process repeats itself after having these products distributed to the retail agencies.

Votes
Average: 7.7 (44 votes)

Comments

Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, so, then

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 7.0 143% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 1.00243902439 200% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 6.8 74% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.15609756098 63% => OK
Pronoun: 16.0 5.60731707317 285% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 25.0 33.7804878049 74% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 3.97073170732 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 850.0 965.302439024 88% => OK
No of words: 167.0 196.424390244 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.08982035928 4.92477711251 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.59483629437 3.73543355544 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.51098915045 2.65546596893 95% => OK
Unique words: 97.0 106.607317073 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.580838323353 0.547539520022 106% => OK
syllable_count: 242.1 283.868780488 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 1.53170731707 326% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 7.0 4.33902439024 161% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 3.36585365854 89% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 8.94146341463 134% => OK
Sentence length: 13.0 22.4926829268 58% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 27.9676152004 43.030603864 65% => OK
Chars per sentence: 70.8333333333 112.824112599 63% => OK
Words per sentence: 13.9166666667 22.9334400587 61% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.66666666667 5.23603664747 32% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 0.0 3.70975609756 0% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 1.13902439024 439% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.09268292683 171% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.204095122783 0.215688989381 95% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0798632388633 0.103423049105 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0385061714724 0.0843802449381 46% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.125838897493 0.15604864568 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0157193892395 0.0819641961636 19% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.5 13.2329268293 72% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 75.2 61.2550243902 123% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.0 10.3012195122 58% => Flesch kincaid grade is low.
coleman_liau_index: 11.65 11.4140731707 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.25 8.06136585366 102% => OK
difficult_words: 42.0 40.7170731707 103% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 11.4329268293 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.2 10.9970731707 65% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 11.0658536585 72% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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