The diagram shows proposed changes to Foster Road

Essay topics:

The diagram shows proposed changes to Foster Road.

Shown by the diagram is the information about a plan to install some new facilities on Foster Road.

Overall, there will be extensive development with regards to construction of traffic sign as well as pavement expansion.

Looking at the first diagram, Foster Road located between SE 84 and 85 revenue to be specific merely consists of some house buildings and electrical grids along the both sides. Additionally, the main road is huge enough where it could be filled by 2 cars in one direction.

Turing to the second diagram, sidewalks will be expanded on both sides of the road, and there will be new bicycle lanes on which citizens could go cycling safely. Some trees are instead likely to be planted along both sides of the road, which could generate fresh air for not only walkers but also vehicle users. Moreover, the traffic sign and crossing lane passing through between both roads will be installed at the lower end of the road so that it might be able to reduce the traffic accident on the road. Interestingly, as a result of the construction, lanes for cars will be smaller, so it could merely be filled by a car for each way.

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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, look, moreover, second, so, well, as a result, as well as

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 7.0 186% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 1.00243902439 998% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 5.0 6.8 74% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.15609756098 158% => OK
Pronoun: 3.0 5.60731707317 54% => OK
Preposition: 29.0 33.7804878049 86% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 3.97073170732 151% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 956.0 965.302439024 99% => OK
No of words: 200.0 196.424390244 102% => OK
Chars per words: 4.78 4.92477711251 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.76060309309 3.73543355544 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.55134768309 2.65546596893 96% => OK
Unique words: 119.0 106.607317073 112% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.595 0.547539520022 109% => OK
syllable_count: 287.1 283.868780488 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.33902439024 46% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 0.0 3.36585365854 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 8.94146341463 89% => OK
Sentence length: 25.0 22.4926829268 111% => OK
Sentence length SD: 33.6654032354 43.030603864 78% => OK
Chars per sentence: 119.5 112.824112599 106% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.0 22.9334400587 109% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.875 5.23603664747 189% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 3.70975609756 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.09268292683 49% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.163402736635 0.215688989381 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0878430175839 0.103423049105 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0734013902423 0.0843802449381 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.122154687343 0.15604864568 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0844735521966 0.0819641961636 103% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.6 13.2329268293 103% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 63.02 61.2550243902 103% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 10.3012195122 104% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.74 11.4140731707 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.59 8.06136585366 107% => OK
difficult_words: 47.0 40.7170731707 115% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 11.4329268293 96% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.9970731707 109% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.0658536585 99% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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