The given diagram illustrates the main stages which take place in the process of producing drinking water by using rainwater in an Australian town.
Overall, it is noteworthy that there are four main steps in how rainwater is collected for the use of drinking water in an Australian town starting with collecting rainwater. Additionally, the most noticeable feature is that there are two stages that require storage tanks.
At the first stage of the process, rainwater is collected in gutters on rooftops and runs down the pipes at the side of every house, and it enters the drain underground before being transferred to a water filter. Rainwater is then filtered to remove any toxic substance or elements. Subsequently, water flows into a storage tank and be ready for the next stage.
After being pumped into a second reservoir, water is treated and added some chemicals for people’s consumption. Eventually, drinking water continues to be transferred back to houses along pipes and ready for Australian towners to utilize for their daily needs.
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- The diagram shows rainwater is collected for the use of drinking water in an Australian town 89
Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, second, so, then
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 7.0 171% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 6.8 88% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.15609756098 127% => OK
Pronoun: 6.0 5.60731707317 107% => OK
Preposition: 25.0 33.7804878049 74% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.97073170732 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 891.0 965.302439024 92% => OK
No of words: 171.0 196.424390244 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.21052631579 4.92477711251 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.61617157096 3.73543355544 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.7963735817 2.65546596893 105% => OK
Unique words: 106.0 106.607317073 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.619883040936 0.547539520022 113% => OK
syllable_count: 273.6 283.868780488 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.45097560976 110% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.33902439024 46% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 3.36585365854 59% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 8.94146341463 89% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 22.4926829268 93% => OK
Sentence length SD: 46.3357313528 43.030603864 108% => OK
Chars per sentence: 111.375 112.824112599 99% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.375 22.9334400587 93% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.875 5.23603664747 55% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 3.70975609756 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.09268292683 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.462123140084 0.215688989381 214% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.185119088681 0.103423049105 179% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.171590824558 0.0843802449381 203% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.291812841048 0.15604864568 187% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.122433884596 0.0819641961636 149% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.8 13.2329268293 104% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 61.2550243902 82% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 10.3012195122 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.94 11.4140731707 113% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.11 8.06136585366 113% => OK
difficult_words: 48.0 40.7170731707 118% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 11.4329268293 118% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.9970731707 95% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 11.0658536585 127% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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