The diagram shows the water cycle, which is the continuous movement of water on, above and below the surface of the earth.
The diagram illustrates the cycle of water from ocean to air and to land.
Overall, there are three steps in the water movement process, from the ocean to air to land.
Initially, there is about 80 percent of the amount of water in the ocean, which is evaporated to be vapor in the air and turns to be a condensing cloud. After that, when the cloud holds the great amount of water, it falls as a rain and the amount of water called precipitation which makes lakes in land and snow when the rainfall is frozen.
Eventually, the water from the melted snow and ground water which moves through an impervious layer of the earth and runs back into the ocean is intruded by salt water at the end of the process. Having completed all these steps, the cycle of water begins again.
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- In some countries, young people are encouraged to work or travel for a year between finishing high school and starting university studies. Discuss the advantages and disadvantages for young people who decide to do this. 67
- The diagram shows the water cycle, which is the continuous movement of water on, above and below the surface of the earth. 56
Transition Words or Phrases used:
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.0 100% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 6.8 88% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 3.15609756098 190% => OK
Pronoun: 3.0 5.60731707317 54% => OK
Preposition: 27.0 33.7804878049 80% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.97073170732 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 641.0 965.302439024 66% => OK
No of words: 143.0 196.424390244 73% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.48251748252 4.92477711251 91% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.45807182446 3.73543355544 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.23739070342 2.65546596893 84% => OK
Unique words: 79.0 106.607317073 74% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.552447552448 0.547539520022 101% => OK
syllable_count: 189.9 283.868780488 67% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.45097560976 90% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.33902439024 69% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 3.36585365854 59% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 6.0 8.94146341463 67% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 22.4926829268 102% => OK
Sentence length SD: 52.5600186031 43.030603864 122% => OK
Chars per sentence: 106.833333333 112.824112599 95% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.8333333333 22.9334400587 104% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.0 5.23603664747 0% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 3.70975609756 27% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.09268292683 122% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.281089038053 0.215688989381 130% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.14702375819 0.103423049105 142% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.045705061343 0.0843802449381 54% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.176756991019 0.15604864568 113% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0388288285879 0.0819641961636 47% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.6 13.2329268293 88% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 73.51 61.2550243902 120% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 10.3012195122 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.0 11.4140731707 79% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.09 8.06136585366 100% => OK
difficult_words: 30.0 40.7170731707 74% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 11.4329268293 96% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.9970731707 102% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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