Given is the diagram delineating the various steps to complete a fish pie product. It is perceptible that this is a linear process with multiple steps, which commences with delivering potatoes and salmon and ends with putting them in the archive.
Initially, the potatoes are delivered to the factory up to one month in advance followed by the process of cleaning them by washing with water and disinfecting them thoroughly before processing. In the subsequent phase, potatoes start to be peeled and cut into small slices. The purpose of this is to make the potatoes easier to cook and give shape to the pieces of potatoes we usually eat. After that, potato slices are fried at high temperature by putting them in boiling water and then chilling at a moderate temperature. After completing the above steps, potatoes are stored to get ready for the next steps. Turning to the fish preparation, the delivery of salmon slices is to be made to the factory within twelve hours prior to the process. These salmon slices are like potatoes, they must all be clean before being seasoned: squeeze lemon and sprinkle with salt. Then, salmon slices are heated by steam over at the same time humans carry out to remove their skin and bones.There is someone at the factory to monitor these salmon slices to check the quality and food safety.
For the pie preparation, peas and sauces are indispensable ingredients, these are prepared ahead of wrapping the pie in the microwaveable containers. Ultimately, all the potatoes, salmon slices, pies and sauce are wrapped manually in a systematic way, then brought to the freezer. At the end of this process, the products are put into storage for better food management.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 979, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: There
...arry out to remove their skin and bones.There is someone at the factory to monitor th...
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Line 3, column 231, Rule ID: IN_A_X_MANNER[1]
Message: Consider replacing "in a systematic way" with adverb for "systematic"; eg, "in a hasty manner" with "hastily".
...es, pies and sauce are wrapped manually in a systematic way, then brought to the freezer. At the en...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
so, then
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 7.0 271% => Less to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 6.8 162% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.15609756098 95% => OK
Pronoun: 16.0 5.60731707317 285% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 54.0 33.7804878049 160% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.97073170732 101% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1415.0 965.302439024 147% => OK
No of words: 287.0 196.424390244 146% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.93031358885 4.92477711251 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.11595363751 3.73543355544 110% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.6464051163 2.65546596893 100% => OK
Unique words: 158.0 106.607317073 148% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.550522648084 0.547539520022 101% => OK
syllable_count: 450.0 283.868780488 159% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.45097560976 110% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 1.53170731707 261% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 4.0 4.33902439024 92% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 3.36585365854 119% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 8.94146341463 145% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 22.4926829268 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 39.9741040435 43.030603864 93% => OK
Chars per sentence: 108.846153846 112.824112599 96% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.0769230769 22.9334400587 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.615384615385 5.23603664747 12% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 3.0 3.83414634146 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 2.0 1.69756097561 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 3.70975609756 162% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.13902439024 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.09268292683 122% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.050306403317 0.215688989381 23% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.023566954445 0.103423049105 23% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0367605587741 0.0843802449381 44% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0439343786047 0.15604864568 28% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0163814631184 0.0819641961636 20% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.8 13.2329268293 97% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 61.2550243902 80% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 10.3012195122 116% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.31 11.4140731707 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.47 8.06136585366 105% => OK
difficult_words: 68.0 40.7170731707 167% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 11.4329268293 96% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.9970731707 98% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.0658536585 99% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 11.2359550562 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 9
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