The diagrams below give information about the manufacture of frozen fish pies. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
Overall, the diagram shows a fish pie making process, beginning with delivering potatoes and fresh salmon to the factory, followed by cooking and wrapping all ingredients in trays and culminating in the production of freezing and storing the completed products in the cold room before doing delivery to customers.
First, the potatoes are delivered to the factory and this stage can last up to one month. Then the whole potatoes are cleaned and peeled, the skin is disposed of. After the peeling step, the potatoes are sliced and brought to cook. And next is the chilling time, the chilling of the boiled potatoes is followed by a storing stage before the packaging stage.
In the salmon preparation process, the delivery time must be within a day, it takes max 12 hours to get to the factory to start the marination stage with lemon juice and salt. Then the salmon is steamed in the oven, and the skin and bones are removed and thrown into waste disposal. After the salmon is inspected by factory workers, which ensures all products are followed to strict standards. At this stage, the salmon is combined with peas, sauce, and the prepared potatoes. Once all ingredients are combined to freezing, they are set off to store and ready to dispatch.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, then
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 7.0 200% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 1.00243902439 200% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 6.8 206% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.15609756098 32% => OK
Pronoun: 4.0 5.60731707317 71% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 33.7804878049 104% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.97073170732 76% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1039.0 965.302439024 108% => OK
No of words: 214.0 196.424390244 109% => OK
Chars per words: 4.85514018692 4.92477711251 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.82475343497 3.73543355544 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.46270549061 2.65546596893 93% => OK
Unique words: 116.0 106.607317073 109% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.542056074766 0.547539520022 99% => OK
syllable_count: 318.6 283.868780488 112% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 7.0 4.33902439024 161% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.482926829268 621% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 3.36585365854 119% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 8.94146341463 112% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 22.4926829268 93% => OK
Sentence length SD: 69.6494795386 43.030603864 162% => OK
Chars per sentence: 103.9 112.824112599 92% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.4 22.9334400587 93% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.1 5.23603664747 21% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 3.0 3.83414634146 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 3.70975609756 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.13902439024 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.09268292683 122% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0289019352785 0.215688989381 13% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.00820376840432 0.103423049105 8% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.024611305213 0.0843802449381 29% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0273458946811 0.15604864568 18% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0386729351332 0.0819641961636 47% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.2 13.2329268293 92% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 61.2550243902 96% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 10.3012195122 100% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.91 11.4140731707 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.0 8.06136585366 99% => OK
difficult_words: 45.0 40.7170731707 111% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 11.4329268293 96% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.9970731707 95% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.0658536585 99% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 11.2359550562 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 9
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