The bar chart compares the proportion of four different means of transport used in Edmonton and the table gives information about the various purposes of using car in city.
At first glance, it is noticeable that cars are the most popular modes of transport among four and citizens mostly use cars for the purpose of commuting to work and doing their business.
Cars contributed the largest share at 45 percent, while the figure for light rail transit is 10% less than that of cars at 35%. Buses and taxi share equal proportion at just below a third as high as that of light rail transit, 10%.
Surprisingly, 55% of people using cars to commute to their workplace is reported. The second most significant share is business, while just a narrow margin of 5% is recorded for the purpose of sending kids to school. Using cars for shopping is responsible for 15% and the same figure is given for leisure activities.
- The graph below shows the amount of money spent on books in Germany France Italy and Austria between 1995 and 2005 Write a report for a university lecturer describing the information below 75
- The graph below shows the changes in UK birth rate of women in 6 different age groups from 1973 to 2008 61
- The graph below shows the quantities of goods transported in the UK between 1974 and 2002 by four different modes of transport Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant 78
- The graph and chart give information and forecast about the vehicle and CO2 emission in England and Wales between 2000 and 2020 67
- The diagrams below give information on transport and car use in Edmonton 44
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, if, second, third, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.0 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 6.8 74% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.15609756098 95% => OK
Pronoun: 6.0 5.60731707317 107% => OK
Preposition: 23.0 33.7804878049 68% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.97073170732 76% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 742.0 965.302439024 77% => OK
No of words: 159.0 196.424390244 81% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.66666666667 4.92477711251 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.55098862472 3.73543355544 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.44062436367 2.65546596893 92% => OK
Unique words: 94.0 106.607317073 88% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.591194968553 0.547539520022 108% => OK
syllable_count: 223.2 283.868780488 79% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.33902439024 46% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 3.36585365854 30% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 8.94146341463 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 22.4926829268 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 38.7572244747 43.030603864 90% => OK
Chars per sentence: 106.0 112.824112599 94% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.7142857143 22.9334400587 99% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.14285714286 5.23603664747 98% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 3.70975609756 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.09268292683 49% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.289858176113 0.215688989381 134% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.13123189983 0.103423049105 127% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.116686391035 0.0843802449381 138% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.186479771212 0.15604864568 120% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.120130026558 0.0819641961636 147% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.9 13.2329268293 90% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 66.07 61.2550243902 108% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 10.3012195122 92% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.1 11.4140731707 88% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.3 8.06136585366 103% => OK
difficult_words: 36.0 40.7170731707 88% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 11.4329268293 118% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.9970731707 98% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.0658536585 99% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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