The diagrams below .show changes of a cinema from 1980 until now. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant
The picture gives information about the changes of one cinema between 1980 and now. It is clear that there are some additions of the number of cinemas and other facilities.
In 1980, the place was quite spacious and there were only two cinemas: the large one was on the left of the entrance, and the smaller was on the right side of the place. A ticket box and a place for buy refreshments were on the left of the entrance. The watchers could go straight the hall and bumped into the toilet which was located on the same side with the cinema 1. The car park was constructed at the end of cinema.
On these days, there is an update from two cinemas to five cinemas. The small cinema from 1980 is now converted into three large cinemas and there are two extra cinemas on the right side with the restroom in the middle. The ticket booth is remained, meanwhile the added DVD shop takes over the Drinks bar. And the old cinema 1 is replaced by the relaxing room for customers and the food and drinks area. In addition, the car park now has been demolished.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
so, while, as to, in addition
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 7.0 214% => Less to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 6.8 147% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.15609756098 63% => OK
Pronoun: 3.0 5.60731707317 54% => OK
Preposition: 28.0 33.7804878049 83% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.97073170732 101% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 857.0 965.302439024 89% => OK
No of words: 197.0 196.424390244 100% => OK
Chars per words: 4.35025380711 4.92477711251 88% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.74642080493 3.73543355544 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.19315189302 2.65546596893 83% => OK
Unique words: 107.0 106.607317073 100% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.543147208122 0.547539520022 99% => OK
syllable_count: 268.2 283.868780488 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 8.0 4.33902439024 184% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.482926829268 414% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 3.36585365854 89% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 8.94146341463 123% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 22.4926829268 76% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 36.4576058566 43.030603864 85% => OK
Chars per sentence: 77.9090909091 112.824112599 69% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.9090909091 22.9334400587 78% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.63636363636 5.23603664747 50% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 3.0 3.83414634146 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 3.70975609756 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 4.09268292683 195% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.161508964416 0.215688989381 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0653298944966 0.103423049105 63% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.068294250293 0.0843802449381 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.127885815673 0.15604864568 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0648996262224 0.0819641961636 79% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.0 13.2329268293 60% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 71.14 61.2550243902 116% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 10.3012195122 74% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.65 11.4140731707 67% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.12 8.06136585366 88% => OK
difficult_words: 33.0 40.7170731707 81% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 11.4329268293 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.9970731707 80% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 11.0658536585 72% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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