The bar chart describes the sales of different goods in pounds ( £) in the UK over four seasons in 2015.
The bar graph gives information about the revenues of variety goods in UK during four seasons in the year 2015. Overall, the sales for all types of goods are higher in the spring and the winter.
Clothing was more consumed in spring and winter, which was shown by approximately £110000 of clothing in winter, compared with £100000 in spring. Meanwhile the revenues for children’s toy in winter was higher than in spring which were £60000 and around £30000, respectively. For the garden goods, the data in spring was twice than in winter. Household industry in winter and electrical equipment industry in spring reached the equivalent revenues , at £80000. In addition, the children’s toy’s sales in winter took the indentical position with spring’s electrical equipment, at £60000.
In summer, there were £80000 of clothing in summer, followed by £70000 of household’s sales which was similar to the data of clothing’s sales in autumn. The revenues for garden and kids’ toys were lower than £40000 in comparison with £50000 of electrical goods in summer. While in fall, there were £60000 of household and electrical equipment, £40000 of garden and children’s toy.
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Suggestion: Meanwhile,
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
so, while, in addition
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 7.0 143% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 6.8 103% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.15609756098 95% => OK
Pronoun: 0.0 5.60731707317 0% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 33.7804878049 118% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 3.97073170732 151% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1006.0 965.302439024 104% => OK
No of words: 189.0 196.424390244 96% => OK
Chars per words: 5.32275132275 4.92477711251 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.70779275107 3.73543355544 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.81054602792 2.65546596893 106% => OK
Unique words: 92.0 106.607317073 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.486772486772 0.547539520022 89% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 268.2 283.868780488 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 5.0 4.33902439024 115% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 3.36585365854 119% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 8.94146341463 112% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 22.4926829268 80% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 26.332489438 43.030603864 61% => OK
Chars per sentence: 100.6 112.824112599 89% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.9 22.9334400587 82% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.2 5.23603664747 42% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 3.0 3.83414634146 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 2.0 1.69756097561 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 3.70975609756 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.09268292683 171% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.107441826687 0.215688989381 50% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0558407677934 0.103423049105 54% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0897563952618 0.0843802449381 106% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.125848382947 0.15604864568 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.131033839803 0.0819641961636 160% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.1 13.2329268293 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 70.13 61.2550243902 114% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.9 10.3012195122 77% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.58 11.4140731707 119% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.87 8.06136585366 98% => OK
difficult_words: 40.0 40.7170731707 98% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 11.4329268293 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.9970731707 84% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 11.0658536585 72% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.